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AMA: The Boyfriend Ch. 483-485

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Legendary story teller Break!

Bob

Mildly dreading Robbie being in the suite. Everything about Vera & her crew sets off alarms. The vibes read to me as 'Robbie is about to be a victim of sexual assualt by an app user'. Which I hope I'm wrong.

Void_Syzygy

Awesome sequence! I love how Dayana isn’t being jealous or overly judgemental can we just take a minute to digest that Robbie almost got sucked off by an in world celebrity and he’s trying to play cool like dude if ever there was someone to use your sex pass with it’s her!

Adam

My only grief is that we are already down to 9.5k left words for this batch :D

Darkflint

Great installment! And it dropped b4 midnight! It a flim flammin miracle!

DocEGJ

Jay is still downstairs cleaning up her business partner's DJing gear, so SHE'S safe...

BreaktheBar

I caught myself almost typing it once. I'm concerned for myself.

BreaktheBar

Is Robbie going to try to save Luna? Or perhaps Jay got roped into this and wants out?

Matthew Adams

So very good! My only disappointment is that like many others, I wish it could go on forever. It reads so smoothly and quickly that I didn't realize I'd gotten to the end until it was already there. It's like reaching into the bag and realizing that you've already eaten the last cookie.

Shadracht

I saw no rogue Vanessas in this section! Congrats Break!

AndyWanKenobi

oh man why is he going in!!! obviously its for the narrative but danger!!!! he’s gonna get manipulated with luna !!!!!!!!! robbie!!!!

Harmonizing

Why why why do you stop at the most interesting times it’s torture to your friends mr break. But thank you for yet another fantastic chapter please tell me are you as funny in real life because you are great at writing humor.

Jim lynch


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