Red Flags Go Faster Ch 1-7 (Alpha 2nd Draft)
Added 2025-07-08 00:53:52 +0000 UTCHey folks. This is just a slightly cleaned-
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Good catch!
BreaktheBar
2025-07-12 12:50:29 +0000 UTCJust as a heads up: "She lost her dress somewhere in the kitchen" and then "she slipped the dress down over her hips". Chapter break right in the middle. Great job all around though!
Roxconn
2025-07-12 10:09:57 +0000 UTCThe red flags part is something I'm working on, and it's more like 'Are these Red Flags?' and 'How many questionable things does it take to BE a red flag?' I'll likely post a Call for Suggestions soon to see if folks have some thoughts on questionable red flags that I can use or adapt, but you identified a couple that I've added in already. Having an OnlyFans is one of them, even if it's 'non-nude.' It just raises a lot of questions/eyebrows. Being so marriage focused (potentially to the point of love-bombing) is another one.
BreaktheBar
2025-07-09 02:55:02 +0000 UTCCute story so far, I like it! I guess I don't see the red flags yet; I suppose they are because she dropped words like marriage and such after only a few hours and that she's OFG #2 in the Break Universe? Granted, I've been married 30 years and my wife is the only person I ever dated. We were married within 3 months of meeting in person! So, I'm not exactly clued into what red or green flags for dating are. lmao
Keld
2025-07-08 23:31:50 +0000 UTC
