Font of Fertility; Part 1 (Bundle Ch 1-5)
Added 2024-12-15 06:24:59 +0000 UTCHello Folks!
This is the collected bundle and rewrite of original chapters 1-5 of Font of Fertility, the series that really kicked off, and then later kick-started, my writing career. This bundle, and the ones to follow, are closer to a 'novelisation' for the future with the larger chapters broken down into my digestible ones, but I wouldn't call this 'Book 1' yet. It also represents the 2024 'Final Rewrite' as some character elements change and some old continuity snafus get cleaned up.
Sitting at 69k words, it's too large to post directly here on Patreon, so it will only be available through the PDF and ePub downloadable files. If you do spot any grammar/spelling or continuity issues, please feel free to point them out! This story will eventually be formatted into Book and eBook form so anything fixed now will save time in the future!
Cheers,
~Break.
Comments
Page 148 in pdf she was leaving with them I think that should be “living”
Anodes
2024-12-16 17:09:17 +0000 UTC"our Mom’s had been best friends and we’d been around each other all the time. Every family event, half of our family vacations, even most weekends and summers off from school our Mom’s had tag-teamed watching over us if we weren’t enrolled in different years of the same camp program." You're using the possessive "Mom's" instead of the plural here. Cut the apostrophes. Catching a bunch of spelling typos here and there that could be cleaned up pretty easily, but that's the first glaring grammatical error I've come across.
Matt
2024-12-16 16:16:10 +0000 UTCThat's so that when it gets published it's more "traditional" chapters and easier to split into multiple books, right? That's how I understood it in the updates I've read
ReadingRed
2024-12-16 05:59:25 +0000 UTCIt's the ORIGINAL chapters 1-5, I have broken them up into shorter chapters based on the events of the story.
BreaktheBar
2024-12-16 05:07:21 +0000 UTCP 57 - “beco” s.b. “become”
Anodes
2024-12-15 23:43:09 +0000 UTCIt’s chapters 1-19, no?
Anodes
2024-12-15 22:39:28 +0000 UTC
