Font of Fertility Ch. 35 (Alpha)
Added 2024-08-28 18:36:18 +0000 UTCThe following is the Alpha Draft of Font of
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It still says 34 lol
JC
2024-09-02 07:55:01 +0000 UTCtypo: this is Chap 35 but it says 34 at the top
JC
2024-09-01 03:47:27 +0000 UTCJer needs to put some runes around the school so he gets power from all sexual activity occuring there!
JC
2024-08-31 11:18:39 +0000 UTCProof read from where Lauren says "That's all I need to know " about Beth. There are some uses of your instead of my and you instead of I or me. Good chapter otherwise.
RadAsha Nightstrider
2024-08-30 17:34:47 +0000 UTCThinking back, I'm pretty sure there was a conversation about this but I can't remember if Maya was telling the truth or just saying it to bother Annalise. I'll need to cycle back during the next editing round to double check.
BreaktheBar
2024-08-29 13:18:54 +0000 UTCI really wish Jer would grant Benji's request for super pheromones - or at least make Emily lust for him! That would kill two birds with one stone.
JC
2024-08-29 09:01:11 +0000 UTCReally want Jer to push Aidra into being his gf and joining the harem... the "affecting the magic" thing is silly.
JC
2024-08-29 09:00:26 +0000 UTC> I was starting to think she was looking for me to do some race-based dirty talk Lol, what? They already are doing that.
JC
2024-08-29 08:59:51 +0000 UTCI thought Maya already lost her v card long before her sister?
AZ
2024-08-29 07:08:26 +0000 UTCOh Jeremiah...Aidra. I'm pretty sure that just avoiding *saying* how you both are feeling isn't enough to avoid the consequences. Especially when you're both acknowledging those feelings unspoken. At least, that is my assumption - I might need to go reread the chapter with Ramona. But I doubt the "label" applied is so much the issue over the feeling behind things. I'm curious to find out if it's already had an effect, maybe something revealed if she goes to "Evil Eye" Emily - or hell, that Vice Principal? I'm also wondering if there might be a way around her being unable to join a Coven to level up her powers - such as Jeremiah potentially being able to do something for her like he did for Annalise, and "gift" her with some of his Pool. Definitely not always, but when she would have normally wanted the extra "Juice" from working some spell with a Coven. It might not be the same thing, but it might provide enough of a similar effect that it would be enough to forgo the issue and let them stop dancing around the issue and be together. Have I put too much thought into it? Probably. But Aidra is definitely my favorite and damnit, I want her in the Concubine Chat like she deserves. Anyway, great chapter, as always, Break!
DinoPunk
2024-08-29 06:35:01 +0000 UTCAwesome, keep'm coming!
Psychopuppy
2024-08-28 22:20:26 +0000 UTC
