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OnlyFans Girl Ch. 546-555

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Sorry for the inconvenience, hopefully all will be righted soon.

~Break.

Comments

"John is the best compliment to my puzzle piece" – complement

Matthias Urlichs

"my Visa is running out" – not the credit card, so no capital letter here.

Matthias Urlichs

I just watched a clip where Ian McKellen is talking about calling strangers love and how powerful that is and how it made him feel like he was finally at home when he heard it. It made me think about the last scene here and the poignancy you built into it.

Don Alejo

I’m not crying you’re crying!

Pat Connelly

The original version on CHYOA had a big 'blackmail' thing to it. When I took on writing a different thread I specifically wanted to do the opposite. So far I think it's working out :P

BreaktheBar

Yeah, I have to say that I finally started reading this series and am pleasantly surprised by it. Not at all what I thought it would be. Love the characters and story arc so far and though I am only on chapter 94, am in for the long haul. The story description made me think it was going to be a blackmail type story but not that at all. I don't think I've read anything from BreakTheBar that I haven't quickly found on my favorites and re-read lists.

Falstaff1960

Yah yah, I know... I'm just grumbling because selfish reasons. It's your own fault for being such a good author with multiple amazing stories you've addicted people to.

Mehntal1st

I subbed for OFG and I was already dreading the goodbye from the summer. Gemma is a treat. Her sexy strong woman vibe got me hooked when I first started reading on Lit. I hope it’s not forever for the reunion.

J Bell

I've mentioned a few times that I'm going to be writing THREE chapters of FoF right after the OFG releases.

BreaktheBar

Don't mind me...I'm just over here pouting about the 55 chapters of OFG since the last FoF release. 😞

Mehntal1st

Why do you have to write characters it is so easy to care about, Break? I cried on and off this entire chapter because I could feel their hurt and longing. So, good job, but also fuck you a little bit?

Daukash

Man this hit me in the feels

SovietDegendays

Man I just want all of them together in one big house

Gregory Sullivan

Damn Bear. Sitting here with teary eyes, it's your fault. Hurry up with the next 8 month so we can get Gemma back :)

Michael Michelsen

That makes me even more strongly opposed to the "add every woman to the relationship" people. Writing a long-term, faithful triad is going to be hard... but it will also be way better than a story where they're just having sex with whoever and there are a dozen other women when Gemma comes back.

FlareNight

Well, it's officially not NYC/Manhattan if they found a good Mexican restaurant...

Toodles McGhee

Well I'm very interested in the upcoming chapters after that.

zktvo

Damm, the cliffhanger. Great prone bone. so hot oof

Mask

Damn but does it ever hurt to see Gemma getting on that plane! Great chapters Break.

Trav

This release made me want to cry. Good work Break. I hope you got some major time skips planned bc 8 months at your usual pace will be chapter 1500 before Gemma is back where she belongs

Rubicon

I've been anticipating and dreading this moment in the series. The dynamic change will help keep things interesting. Curiosity over Sabrina's thing is eating at me though. Write fast, please!

Juggermouse

Man, now I gotta wait to find out what the as up with Sabrina XC

Mojanks

Glad to know it is not ending any time soon

Zaralith

Next up: 2 more OFG releases (20 chapters), then FoF, QTNW, and Sponsored chapters.

BreaktheBar

Well, that was a big moment in OFG.

BreaktheBar


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