Font of Fertility Ch. 33 (Alpha)
Added 2024-06-24 20:16:34 +0000 UTCThe content of this post has been removed for the time being as I, Break, make sure that the story fully complies with Patreon ToS and does not risk my platform. If this post has not been edited back into existence after some time, assume that the content has been made available in a larger bundle.
Sorry for the inconvenience, hopefully all will be righted soon.
~Break.
Comments
The dreaming stuff initially happened pretty early on in the story, involving Stacey. Without digging into it I want to say somewhere in Chapters 3-5. Jordan helping him design and decide on a Magical political structure to use in his territory was more recent, mostly in one phone call and briefly referenced one or two more times. It has been delved into deeply yet with a full scene.
BreaktheBar
2024-08-27 12:45:00 +0000 UTCOk I'm confused. I clearly missed something - when / what chapter did he do dream travel in before? And also, what does this refer to: "Jordan, working on how to form a working government structure" - when did that come up? What chapter?
JC
2024-08-27 11:39:48 +0000 UTCMore and more a fan of Aidra and hoping something can be done for her to join the harem. Her "dream" desires seem to implicate she's fallen/falling beyond just fuckbuddy status. Looking forward to what comes next.
DinoPunk
2024-08-13 22:30:03 +0000 UTCNope! I'm just trying to catch up on everything as life has been getting in the way of my planned schedules. More FoF is coming very soon.
BreaktheBar
2024-08-01 06:13:01 +0000 UTCIs this series on hiatus now?
AZ
2024-07-30 21:56:05 +0000 UTCUgh, can’t wait for a bunch more of this story.
Roadspill
2024-07-02 22:25:09 +0000 UTCThe chapters are going great. Looking forward to reading where it goes. With high school coming to an end. It opens the possibilities up for the world you created.
Mr. Conners
2024-06-25 22:53:08 +0000 UTCSounds like all the in-school PDA is going to be officially addressed... I can't remember if we've met the Principal before, male/female...magic/norm... Should be an interesting encounter. I'm also glad that Mrs. Morrison is being revisited again. She was teased at the beginning then just dropped while the story progressed. I love Jeremiah's interactions with the more mature ladies...their reactions to him are always so good! I think it would be fitting if his judgement on the abusive asshole made anything he did to his wife (or anyone else for that matter) happen to him instead...no loopholes, so even if he arranges for someone else to abuse her, it still happens to him. A few editing mistakes below: #1# "“Mind if I hope on?” she asked, wiggling her eyebrows." - "hope" should be "hop" #2# "...or how his hot tube needed to be cleaned before it could be used again" - "tube" should be "tub" #3# "...to make a final judgement on with the Lord-Sorcerer would hear the case or not" - "with" should be "whether" #4# "“Damn, she’s hot,” Angie said, turning the laptop for Aidea and I could see." - "for" should be "so" and "Aidea" should be "Aidra" #5# "No hurry up, don’t keep our buttholes waiting!" - "No" should be "Now" #6# "What I couldn’t understand was how, after an entire afternoon of sex with three, and then a fourth, women..." - This has a poor use of the plural... "Three women" is correct plural usage, but adding the sentence break changes the structure so that "fourth women" is now the plural which is incorrect. To make it flow correctly "and then a fourth" should be changed to "and then four". #7# "...followed by some quiet and softly romantic time with both Linds and then Stacey,l how I could be ‘unfulfilled’ or whatever..." - Need to remove the extra "I" after the comma so it reads "...Stacey, how I could be..."
Mehntal1st
2024-06-25 12:50:09 +0000 UTCInteresting ideas! And possibly smart ones, if Jerry and Co. think they can trust making those deals. But isn't it also more fun if I make Jerry struggle with if he can bring himself to do those things himself?
BreaktheBar
2024-06-25 07:07:10 +0000 UTCI've been updating my 'look guide' recently, so when we get there I should be prepped for most of the core ladies.
BreaktheBar
2024-06-25 07:05:21 +0000 UTCThat was a lot, and an interesting end point that left me wanting more, without any real danger.. relatively speaking. A fun chapter. As for future judgements, I'm wondering if he can't trade some favors with other seats. Surely Esmerelda wouldn't mind executing a mage if that were what is needed. Likewise removing a happy relationship memory might be something a Life seat would like to do. Then again, we might have a fire vs. air magic battle first. That's the charm of this story, it is only limited by imagination.
patient1
2024-06-25 03:41:46 +0000 UTCThis story is big and could easily become unwieldy, but it seems to be gathering momentum. And it's looking like it's gonna be a fun ride!
Trav
2024-06-25 03:24:14 +0000 UTC"Stacey,l how I could be" needs a space between the , and I; also something's missing as I how I doesn't make sense.
DevilDoc82
2024-06-25 00:57:34 +0000 UTCI want some FoF art lol still my fav story!
SovietDegendays
2024-06-25 00:42:56 +0000 UTC
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