Font of Fertility Ch 32 (Alpha)
Added 2024-06-19 22:11:05 +0000 UTCThe content of this post has been removed for the time being as I, Break, make sure that the story fully complies with Patreon ToS and does not risk my platform. If this post has not been edited back into existence after some time, assume that the content has been made available in a larger bundle.
Sorry for the inconvenience, hopefully all will be righted soon.
~Break.
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JC
2024-06-26 08:26:20 +0000 UTCJerry definitely wasn't planning on being wide-open about PDA with anyone other than Lauren, but Aidra has a way of getting what she wants :P
BreaktheBar
2024-06-25 07:10:51 +0000 UTCOof, I guess I'll need to decide that before she appears in the story again!
BreaktheBar
2024-06-25 07:09:53 +0000 UTCShe is very talented and Victorious is a weird car.
FlareNight
2024-06-21 14:10:27 +0000 UTCAngie climbed into the front and back of Victorious, as well as put the keys in his exhaust to start him up.
Koby Werntz
2024-06-21 13:43:33 +0000 UTCProps to Benji, checked if it was cool, smooth chance came up, shot his shot, got rejected, and took it all in stride.
Krysm Phoenix
2024-06-20 13:07:17 +0000 UTC“and an ass that didn’t quite”, -> quit
Anodes
2024-06-20 12:09:32 +0000 UTCbookmark
JC
2024-06-20 08:54:31 +0000 UTCPut the key in the exhaust? Awesome to get another FoF!
J
2024-06-20 02:35:04 +0000 UTCWoot! A FoF submission! I swear, I wait all month for these... I love the look at how Jeremiah's school life has changed after his ascension but I wonder about the wisdom of showing affection to all the girls while there. Yes he's a sex wizard but high school is not a safe space to be flaunting that. Its gonna be interesting to see how this progresses. I only noticed a few editing mistakes in this one: #1# "I was the only person who threw a part of any size over the break" - "part" should be "party" #2# "We agreed, and Aidra gave us both a hungry look before laughing and saying she’d see me in calls later before heading off." - "calls" should be "class" #3# "“Morning, Miss,” Aidra both said, almost but not quite in stereo." - should be "Aidra and I both said" #4# "blonde Polish girl with an easy smile and an ass that didn’t quite" - "quite" should be "quit" #5# "At the end of the lunch period, Aidra turned in still on the bench next to me and pulled me into a firm kiss" - "Aidra turned in still on the bench" doesn't make sense. I think this should be "Aidra turned, still on the bench,"... removing "it" and adding commas makes the sentence flow better.
Mehntal1st
2024-06-20 02:11:29 +0000 UTCMaria or Marie?
Trav
2024-06-19 23:42:04 +0000 UTCReading goodness for this Juneteenth afternoon!
Trav
2024-06-19 23:28:32 +0000 UTCAidra grinned, then stopped forward.....stepped
Trav
2024-06-19 23:27:43 +0000 UTC
