Psych 347: Sex and Sexuality; Part 2
Added 2024-05-11 04:05:04 +0000 UTCThis addition to the CHYOA Contest Entry was sponsored by Trav!
This is the second and final part to this one-shot story. It is a 'Hands On Sex Ed' story with some mild mind influency elements, but turned out to primarily be an erotic romance.
The contest guidelines were: Spicy, Under 15,000 words
The contest prize is one story featured for a year on the front page of CHYOA.
If I win, I'm hoping to bring the whole QT-verse to CHYOA and get it featured on the front page, so PLEASE consider giving the chapters a Like over there!
Original Starting Post on CHYOA
Cheers all!
~Break.
Comments
TBH, this wasn't my favorite story. I felt like things were very rushed, and we didn't really get to spend much time on either the characters or the individual scenes. Next time you do a space-limited story, it might be better with a smaller scope in terms of scenes (like Porcelain, or Masseur&MILF) rather than an entire semester's worth of sex ed :P Still, not bad overall. Good luck in the competition!
Max G
2024-05-13 02:08:01 +0000 UTCI think it wrapped up nicely. Enjoyable as a one off I think.
zktvo
2024-05-12 23:37:13 +0000 UTCOutside of my gripes about the site, I’d love an expanded story- more detail on each day and some continuation- great work.
J
2024-05-12 13:08:45 +0000 UTCWent and voted for it.
SovietDegendays
2024-05-12 08:23:00 +0000 UTCIs it just me or is CHYOA the most convoluted layout of any erotica site out there?
J
2024-05-11 21:59:15 +0000 UTCFantastic story Break! I hope everyone goes to CHYOA and votes for this absolute gem of a story!
Trav
2024-05-11 16:34:24 +0000 UTCGreat story and I would enjoy a more verbose version or off shoot. Well done sir
Ian B
2024-05-11 16:28:13 +0000 UTCFinished reading the story, then went back through the previous pages to make sure that I gave every installment a thumbs up. Sure enough, I got caught up in the story and missed one. Fixed. Much better than the competition. I hope this works!
patient1
2024-05-11 15:17:26 +0000 UTCI can only repeat what i said the last chapter here: Fleshed out, and not jumping only from sex scene to sex scene, it would be such a great story and really fitting with your other ones. I so much hope that we get to see a real Psych 347 story!
Darkflint
2024-05-11 13:03:09 +0000 UTCGreat stuff! But that 15k word limit feels constraining
Rubicon
2024-05-11 12:17:28 +0000 UTCAgree 100%, this was a great read, and I'd love to know more about what happened to them.
HN
2024-05-11 11:29:04 +0000 UTCRead the whole story and would love to see it continued a little bit more
J N
2024-05-11 10:53:43 +0000 UTC
