Quaranteam: North West Ch. 27 (Alpha)
Added 2024-05-08 22:31:53 +0000 UTCThe following story is based on the fantast
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I hope next chapter comes soon. Cliffhangers suck!
Psychopuppy
2024-05-16 23:51:55 +0000 UTCme as her draw lowered in a silent scream - draw should be jaw?
Mitch Kauffman
2024-05-11 20:57:53 +0000 UTCStance fits better than position I think - 'position' in context sounds like swapping to another sexual position and not just adjusting a little.
BreaktheBar
2024-05-10 21:23:11 +0000 UTCWell, it's been flagged for arrival at least :P
BreaktheBar
2024-05-10 21:16:54 +0000 UTCThey split in their late teens, near end of high school, and didn't see/hear from each other until their very late twenties.
BreaktheBar
2024-05-10 21:14:19 +0000 UTCAs Tanaya is already on her knees on the bed, position would read better than stance in the following sentence. You also use stance again a few lines later to explain the same situation. Tanaya seemed to agree, shifting her stance as she lowered herself down to me
Cameron Davies
2024-05-10 18:22:23 +0000 UTCI have been remiss. Thank you for revealing the answer to my lingering question "Who will be the next to join team Black?" Now I know two plus the next two in the que. Of course, I am still pondering the second part - whether the new teammates will join the Mommy squad or the Fuck Pet squad. I am okay with not knowing, because it gives Ivey room to do some coaching and recruiting. Also, I am looking forward to the temporary housing solution.
patient1
2024-05-10 16:04:59 +0000 UTCWow doubling his harem, in pledges at least, Also interested to see how the Kara left hanging while Harri regenerates turns out
Ian B
2024-05-10 04:54:20 +0000 UTCAs others mentioned, I'm so glad we are finally getting new members for Harrison's Team but I can't help but feel this is going to be a bumpy ride for the group dynamics with two of the three new ladies being unknown quantities and Kara being very volatile, especially with the government. The others were matched with Oracle so I'm expecting some friction. Lord knows after the past few months Harrison deserves a regeneration, but the timing...Kara was primed, now Harrison is unconscious for at least a day...that poor girl. She's gonna be a wreck! I also have a suspicion about Miriams storyline after her scene that I don't want to put in writing because I don't want to put it out into the universe because I would be so pissed...
Mehntal1st
2024-05-10 04:02:30 +0000 UTCFucking finally the Miriam ship has come into port!!!
SovietDegendays
2024-05-09 07:04:40 +0000 UTC"All boobs are good boobs" -Harrison Black, summer of 2020.
patient1
2024-05-09 04:44:21 +0000 UTCHarri is regenerating ð
Robert Giltner
2024-05-09 04:06:15 +0000 UTC"through our twenties" talking about Kara's history maybe should be "after our twenties" or "after our teens" as I don't remember the exact timing of their split.
Gregg Hagerty
2024-05-09 02:41:24 +0000 UTC
