Font of Fertility Ch. 29 (Beta)
Added 2024-05-02 07:20:13 +0000 UTCThe content of this post has been removed for the time being as I, Break, make sure that the story fully complies with Patreon ToS and does not risk my platform. If this post has not been edited back into existence after some time, assume that the content has been made available in a larger bundle.
Sorry for the inconvenience, hopefully all will be righted soon.
~Break.
Comments
It's a shame too cuz this problem could have been solved by canonically making "love" a bigger source of power that simply "lust". The other fonts had to rely on lust to refuel because they were INCAPABLE of love. Then Jeremiah can get all the power he needs, and doesn't have to worry about being a shitty person.
Mikhail Chelpon
2024-09-16 00:24:05 +0000 UTCImpregnating yes but only the willing people who want children but can't but losing the moral compass? hard no or he will become like the other seat, power hungry and sociopathic
Andrea IXIDOR
2024-06-07 20:17:25 +0000 UTCBookmark
JC
2024-05-31 12:39:52 +0000 UTCin my writing group we have a label for this... 'you cliffhanging bastard!"
Rick Shaw
2024-05-09 15:34:04 +0000 UTCYes it’s time to fuck and get people preggers I mean just look for women desperate for a baby and who are struggling to get pregnant and help with a touch of magic 1 or 2 hundred later his lake will be a sea keep it going till it’s ocean size.
Jim lynch
2024-05-09 03:31:50 +0000 UTCYes it’s an unfair wait every time these bloody cliffhangers have me in suspense for the next three to four weeks of waiting trying to guess what’s coming lol it’s not fair.
Jim lynch
2024-05-09 03:29:48 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. My only complaint is that Jeremiah needs to lose this morality real quick and stop looking at things like he is a normal human. He isn’t one. He constantly wants to protect his loved ones but really isn’t doing what needs to be done to gain power. Especially since he is creating enemies left and right. He needs to start impregnating women and he needs to figure out his power runes the girls are working on. This is so damn frustrating chapter after chapter where he is basically powerless and knows how to get the power but refuses. Come on Break. Lay down some shit so he can really start amassing power. I don’t want to read chapters down the road where he is in a fight for his or his girls life and he’s still basically powerless. That shit is frustrating.
Dem0n Hunter
2024-05-03 02:58:19 +0000 UTCbut I have to wait three weeks for it ;-)
Rick Shaw
2024-05-02 21:54:16 +0000 UTCYou get the Moira sex scene at the start of the next chapter, I promise.
BreaktheBar
2024-05-02 21:47:08 +0000 UTCGood installment, a bit of a tease. I was looking forward to an earth moving session with Moira. I’m looking forward, more, to his upcoming engagement with the mom, and I’m hoping soon with the teacher you teased very early on with the dream sequence.
Rick Shaw
2024-05-02 17:47:29 +0000 UTC... those individual paragraphs could be stripped from the chapters. (See, you Have to be the writer; I sure as Hell can't be.)
Way Past 21
2024-05-02 09:42:36 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter, thanks. As busy as you are with your varied stories, it seems like long enough between episodes to lose track of where we readers are in the story. Some authors weave a 'what's happened' review into the first paragraphs of each chapter, as a reminder. While helpful, it becomes tiresome once the story is published in its' entirety, and I'm sure I'm not alone in thinking "Yeah, yeah; I know; let's move it along." My thought is to have you write a separable brief summary paragraph or intro for each chapter. When the story is combined and published, those individual chapters could be stripped, leaving a sleek novel(la).
Way Past 21
2024-05-02 09:39:16 +0000 UTCStay safe
Admiral Ale
2024-05-02 09:00:35 +0000 UTCMonthly Update coming Tomorrow. Working on QT:NW next!
BreaktheBar
2024-05-02 07:20:35 +0000 UTC
