Font of Fertility Ch. 31 (Alpha)
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~Break.
Comments
Why would he give up having Aidra for something he could get freely anyway? Bad decision.
JC
2024-05-31 13:23:02 +0000 UTCBookmark
JC
2024-05-31 13:22:26 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. He’s expanding his horizons. Nice
Ian B
2024-05-06 13:41:25 +0000 UTCSo good!
Trav
2024-05-02 21:38:25 +0000 UTCIs this how to treat my daughter?” she asked Should be “how you” instead of “how to”
Dragondoc
2024-05-02 18:58:29 +0000 UTCIt's coming up next!
BreaktheBar
2024-05-02 16:39:22 +0000 UTCGreat chapter nice and looooooong! Hopefully will not have to wait so long for next one. Also when next chapter of QTNW?
Psychopuppy
2024-05-02 14:28:28 +0000 UTC"She was coming down from her orgasm and starting to fuck back at me again when I pulled out of her completely and instead from two of my fingers into her, fishing downwards for her g-spot" I think you meant to say, "...and instead pushed/thrust/slid/inserted two of my fingers into her..." ------------------------------------------------ There were also a few perspective issues: "The familiarity would have embarrassed you if you were meeting her mother under different circumstances" ... "Aidra said, coming up from her cunnilingus. Then she looked back at you and saw your cock hard and headed in her direction." ... “He’s not a creep,” Ramona said, correcting her daughter before looking back at you and Lauren.
Mehntal1st
2024-05-02 14:27:49 +0000 UTCSecond person slip: "The familiarity would have embarrassed you if you were meeting her mother under different circumstances"
aobn
2024-05-02 13:34:44 +0000 UTCShe was coming down from her orgasm and starting to fuck back at me again when I pulled out of her completely and instead from two of my fingers into her, fishing “Instead from” is wrong. Maybe “instead forced”?
Anodes
2024-05-02 13:11:23 +0000 UTCThat was where the similarities ended though, because where short and petite Ramona was of medium height and curvy as hell. Needs an “Aidra was”, and perhaps a comma.
Anodes
2024-05-02 09:41:35 +0000 UTC
