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OFG Ch 455-459

The content of this post has been removed for the time being as I, Break, make sure that the story fully complies with Patreon ToS and does not risk my platform. If this post has not been edited back into existence after some time, assume that the content has been made available in a larger bundle.

Sorry for the inconvenience, hopefully all will be righted soon.

~Break.

Comments

Yup, I agree with the rest of the gang here. Quality delayed is still quality. We are more interested in getting the fully restored to mint 1968 Pontiac GTO rather than a new and off the shelf Mitsubishi Aero. Work-life balance should always be weighted in favor of the "life" part. Thanks for a great update to the story, as qell as foreshadowing what I'm hoping is a smoking Wednesday night for our illustrious lawyers-in-training...

TRT

Enjoyed these chapters. Yay for a new Patron Saint

Ian B

Good catch!

BreaktheBar

Glad to hear that the "he seems like a good dude" vibe I get from your writing is at least partially validated! Helping out your sister definitely falls into that category. Great chapters!

Trav

last chapter, "tall skinny blonde girl with a lanky gate" should probably be "lanky gait"

Luke Mofford

I'm so eager for these next chapters. Being a law fanatic/lover, I love when the law is included in the story

Charles Bell IV

All good buddy just give us quality over quantity and dont put too much pressure on yourself. Family comes first and life happens, im sure all your readers not just myself understand

Spacecadet5380

Man am I hyped for this. Awesome writing and legal dramas, what's not to love.

Altanius

Got it! Thanks.

BreaktheBar

Good work! Mosche's name is misspelled in the second paragraph

Addeand

Wasn't expecting this to be delayed, but when you're a writer and your sister asks for your help editing her final thesis, you kind of have to say yes -.- I learned a lot about Substance Use Disorders this week and I didn't even fall down a YouTube vortex to do it. I'm hoping to crank these chapters out fast, so expect more tonight!

BreaktheBar


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