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Quaranteam: North West Chapter 23 (Beta)

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I know, right?

Melancholy medic

I’m so invested to find out what the song is

LightningCasino

One chapter a month for QTNW, and it's up next!

BreaktheBar

I'm loving this and can't wait for more. do you have a schedule you are following for posting chapters?

Cynthia Parker

😎

Christopher Tate

I can see why Firepower would come to mind! Not what I was thinking of, but it fits a LOT of the description.

BreaktheBar

I wasn't prepared for this, hahaha. Now it's stuck in my head! Definitely not the right song, but thanks for adding a song onto my playlist.

BreaktheBar

"Rasputin," but the cover by Boiled In Lead.

Christopher Tate

My initial guess, which I don't think is right, is Firepower by Judas Priest. My other guess was Leprosy by Death, but the vocals don't fit. Still thinking about it but the way you describe the vocals isn't usually up my alley. Definitely interested in knowing what the answer is.

zktvo

These were the type of bands that I was thinking of also, mostly because of the vocals being opera esque. Don't know them well enough to make a guess based on their music though, not to my taste as metal goes. The description of the vocals is the only thing that's a bit unique based on the description to me. A harsh vocal scream isn't unique enough as an opener to me.

zktvo

Fantastic album and apparently every second household in the uk has that album.

Jim lynch

Has to be disturbed down with the sickness owwakawaka πŸ˜‚

Jim lynch

Is it anything by Lincoln Park. Because Chaos + Grove + Primal Scream for me is Given Up from the Minutes to Midnight Album. If it isn't you win and i am out of guesses. :)

Dragoon22

Disturbed, Down with sickness

Jeff Hughes

Or, I totally spaced out on which song you meant it the time it took me to scroll back and... squirrel

Jeff Hughes

No one guessed it, and it isn't the one, but it's definitely an interesting choice. Maybe a little too on the nose, though.

BreaktheBar

Was it the 'Primal Scream' that made you narrow it down to those?

BreaktheBar

I have, at times in my life, considered labelling Bat out of Hell as the greatest album ever. It's definitely not what I was going for here, but it definitely IS going back in the CD player in my car the next time I drive.

BreaktheBar

Little more industrial than I was describing, but a GREAT song that could have worked. But there's no Primal Scream!

BreaktheBar

You're either a comedian, or I failed at writing good instructions. Still, you made me go back and listen to a great song again. Kudos!

BreaktheBar

I'm a lowkey fan of Killswitch Engage, so coming back around to this song is definitely fun. And the vocal styles of KSE is probably one of the CLOSEST guesses to the song I was describing.

BreaktheBar

Oooh, this is another close one. I can see where the descriptions fit it fairly well. Not what I was thinking, but definitely could have fit in.

BreaktheBar

That's a great song I'd never heard before! And it definitely fits a lot of the description of the song Kyla put on... BUT, it's not the one. Good try though!

BreaktheBar

I'm not giving ANY spoilers.

BreaktheBar

Anyone guess the song Soilbleed by Grendel ?

Bryan

Just throwing it out there for the song choice…the only reasonable choices will be possibly some mainstream metal bands, even better possibility would be symphonic metal bands such as After Forever, Epica, Nightwish, and Apocalyptica.

Loneshot

Damn! It's really starting to hit the fan! Can't wait to to see how this all plays out! Loving this story!

Shocklance

Possibly not from rereading, but it’s ideal for the situation

Chris Marples

Bat Out Of Hell, Meat Loaf

Chris Marples

I'm with Brett, as you know. STAY SAFE

Admiral Ale

Dragula, Rob Zombie

Toodles McGhee

Say it Ain't So - Wheezer

Jeff Hughes

This my favorite story of breakthebar. I liked it was long and enjoyed it but wish there was more. Then to leave us on a cliff hanger and start on other stories just hurts. Please give me more!

Brett

This Fire by Kill Switch Engage. Even if Wrong this song is a banger and should be listened too always.

Dragoon22

First guess is Nightmare by Avenged Sevenfold.

Loneshot

Argh. You better be getting blisters typing at 240 hits per minute writing the conclusion of that hostage situation, Break. I'm 45. That's too old to be this stressed and invested into a hostage situation story. Oh also: for the song and internet brownie points: Fight Song by Sister Sin

Kahunabob

TFTC! Talk about action-packed! Special thanks for the dramatis personae, I probably wouldn't have needed it if I read this as a book, but with the delay between chapters and now so many parties, it's really appreciated! Finally some edit suggestions: daschund - dachshund on route - en route

HN

Great chapter! Excited to see where this goes. I'm guessing the length of chapter 25 is due to resolving the kidnapping in this chapter and 24 is meeting with the bikers + initiating the rescue. Hopefully we won't have to wait too long until we get to see 25.

zktvo

So, Chapter 25 Alpha took a lot longer than expected but also ended up almost double the length of a regular chapter. That's the explanation for the delayed release here. I'm going to be working on Le Francais over the weekend, and then we'll have an OFG Week starting on Monday (more on the Writing Schedule to come in an actual update.)

BreaktheBar