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Le Français Chapter 49-58

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Fair enough :-) I actually stopped reading this after Chapter One, the first time. It wasn't 'till I ran out of everything else you'd written that I went back. And on a second read, I can see the attraction. I'm still more taken with Unexpected Affections, the new D&D story, and Particularly The Boyfriend - but I'm more than happy to pony up my $US8/mth to help keep you writing :-)

Graham Cairns

I know virtually nothing about the BDSM scene, so I am finding this quite illuminating :-) Also, the last line in Chapter 56 says "the old lion basking in the son " Unless Leo is relaxing inside a kid, I think that should be "sun" :-)

Graham Cairns

I’m liking this story more and more. I love the character development and BDSM milieu. I also enjoy the French - I remember more from my youth than I thought.

Dragondoc

Agreed. Good to stretch those brain muscles I’m sure

Ian B

Understandable, but it would break up the flow of the story too much. This is the compromise so that I can add them in without disrupting the scenes.

BreaktheBar

I enjoy and appreciate the translation. I wish they were right after the French instead of at the bottom though.

Black Rabbit 07

That's totally fair! Not every story is going to be for everyone, and it is definitely a different sort of story than my usual works - but that's what's fun about writing a Commission piece to spice things up a bit!

BreaktheBar

Was trying to figure out why, though I like this series it may be my least favorite of yours. It’s A)too cerebral with the mental chess game, B)I’m just not that into the BDSM or C)a combination. But with all of that I still enjoy it due to it being well written

Ian B

I appreciate the translations. There was absolutely no way I would have been able to work several of those out.

FlareNight