Font of Fertility Ch. 27 (Alpha)
Added 2023-11-30 05:45:45 +0000 UTCThe content of this post has been removed for the time being as I, Break, make sure that the story fully complies with Patreon ToS and does not risk my platform. If this post has not been edited back into existence after some time, assume that the content has been made available in a larger bundle.
Sorry for the inconvenience, hopefully all will be righted soon.
~Break.
Comments
I've enjoyed the story tremendously, but I will say that the way Benji and Jay become in the know feels way too forced. The trust arguments made by those guys were weak at best, and given the verbal and intellectual accumin of the characters in other scenes, this just feels off. I understand that this is where you want the story to go, just don't feel great about how you got there.
John Sanders
2024-01-14 19:19:36 +0000 UTCWas Benji trying to do the math on the drone flying? I feel like he was piecing that together before they left. Also Esmeralda felt a disturbance in the ghost force, and considering she knows WHO had super reality bending power is maaaaaad. Unless she put the ghost tracker on him but idk I’d have to go back and relearn the shadow from the last or last last chapters.
Vindictator1972
2023-12-05 15:53:49 +0000 UTC
