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OnlyFans Girl: Chapter 370-376

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Comments

How much of Sabrina's reaction is related to her knowledge of the pain Gemma went through when her ex cheated, and concern how Gemma's going to take this news?

Ronan

Chapter 350

Jon Fowler

Wait... what? He did? Shit, this is the first time someone is bringing this up, did I forget a scene? Now I need to go digging...

BreaktheBar

But John did tell Gemma that Moshe had got someone's number, and she was happy for him. This really bugged me when I read it.

Jon Fowler

Thinking about this, the three of them could make pretty decent divorce lawyers with non-monogamous specialties. So many divorce lawyers would be quick to use that as cheating, sometimes to their client's detriment. And the three of them have a lot of emotional intelligence to handle the obvious emotional side of things to.

Krysm Phoenix

The reminder that Lucy was his last relationship prior to Gemma and Sabrina is a good point. Lucy strikes me as simultaneously high maintenance as well as somewhat batshit crazy - I can't imagine she ever fought fair in a way that could preserve their relationship. For the best, as it turns out, but that does make things a bit off.

Shadracht

I think Break did a pretty good job of explaining that what Sabrina was upset about was that John hadn't told them about that part and also that it was colored by Sabrina finding out after she knew Tasha's side. What John did makes sense with what he knew at the time but is awful with what Sabrina knew when she found out. I think Sabrina's position, with her knowledge at the time is perfectly correct. They've just set boundaries about cheating (which John mostly led), and now it sounds to her like John told someone else to violate them. Even once he explains, it turns out he left out important info on an issue both girlfriends care about. Even though that's not what he intended, her being upset about it is entirely reasonable. So there is an actual fight going on, which I think addresses your second issue. That avalanches into the makeup sex issue. Sabrina was mad, realized that it wasn't nearly as bad as she thought (which doesn't make people less mad), then channeled that into the makeup sex.

FlareNight

You have some fair takes! What makes it 'right' or 'wrong' is in the outlook on cheating. IS Mosche cheating by talking to someone else with intentionality? John wasn't looking at it that way, but Sabrina immediately did. A lot of it is going to have to do with communication and boundaries, and after our Throuple's long talks about what their own boundaries were, seeing John encourage something that felt wrong to her got Sabrina's back up. That being said, I agree that the argument/fight was one-sided. But, for all that our three protagonists are striving to be the best at communicating as they can, they ARE still 21 year olds and won't get it right every time. Remember that John hasn't really had a relationship since Lucy though, so his experience of Relationship Fights are a little skewed. There's still room for all three of them to do some growing.

BreaktheBar

I definitely didn't do that on purpose... definitely.... OK, maybe.... Alright, yeah, I did it on purpose XD

BreaktheBar

Ngl I didn't notice till you mentioned it but I'd subbed deez nuts in a long time ago

SovietDegendays

Chapter 371 - I'm not sure I agree that John is really in the wrong here at all. The story that they'd been given ended up not being the right thing, but the story he had was that his room-mate's girl screwed a room full of guys. Why wouldn't he encourage Moche to find someone else, if nothing else than to build him back up. Sabrina doesn't have a good look here- it really feels like it's "her way or nothing" here, and it's not a good reflection on their future, to be honest. There isn't a discussion where she gives at all, she just tells him he's wrong and want to know he understands why he's wrong. Its.... Kind of shitty, tbh. Chapter 372- "“I like the way we fight,” you said." That's definitely not the same take I see as an outside viewer. It felt WAY more one sided than what John's portraying. And this line: “I was just thinking that if you’d been more mad at him, you would have gotten some makeup sex too,” Sabrina smirked. Is also *not* a good look. Chapter 376 - I'm glad there's still boundaries they're sticking to, even with their open-mindedness with sex and voyeurs. The scene is very hot. The cuddling was super sweet, too.

Shadracht

Keep wanting to make a Deez Nutz joke everytime the rapper appears in the story. Great read!!!

KernFlakes

*Chef's kiss*

Ronan


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