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AMA: The Boyfriend: Chapter 248-261

Chapter 248

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...is it weird that now that they mention it a back to roots harem story would be fun? Politically powerful concubines forever.

Krysm Phoenix

There's technically still a chance. Just a slim one. Depends on the Day 7 vote.

BreaktheBar

Great chapter. I’m still hoping Robbie gets with Heels.

Eric

RGreat set of chapters! You're killing me dragging out the showdown. Respect to Ginny for how she's handling things. Hoping for a fast turn around on OFG then AMA this week.

zktvo

Even though I’m just as excited as everyone else to see the downfall of Heather, there is now a plot point I’m even more desperate for closure on. I didn’t expect Terra to make a decision to leave JC so speedily and I sure as hell didn’t foresee Robbie’s response to it. However much I don’t like it, his response does make a lot of sense. I hope Terra can accept the form their relationship would have to take, but I have a feeling she and Robbie aren’t to be. I guess it can’t all be sunshine and roses.

Loneshot

Man we are finally so close to seeing her get what's coming!

SovietDegendays

I don't think there is a way for me to dodge out of it at this point. But should I take that as a challenge? :P

BreaktheBar

Ohh mr bar your a shit shit shit I’ve waited for three bloody postings for that bitch to get what’s a coming to her and you do this again AGAIN why o why do you torment us so lol.please make sure the showdown is in the first paragraph please stop the torment the abuse to your loyal fans/readers. Another stunning chapter I’m so looking forward to the next instalment and I’m too hoping to which ever god you like that this story dose not end when the trip ends this has fastly become my favorite story on here or on literotica so please carry it onwards.

Jim lynch

Great update and I agree with Andy that I hope you either continue it or do a part 2 continuing back in Vegas. As I was reading the description of the Sith Lady outfit, I was wondering if you just were describing something you imagined or a cosplay that you came across. With the setup in this story there are a lot of descriptions of elaborate cosplays and i think it would be great if you linked to your inspirations as a comment on the chapters here. Could be a cool additional perk for your patreons.

Terrik392

Such a great installment! Break, I really hope you'll continue this story after the trip is over. Loving everything about this and want to see how this ends up back in Real Life

AndyWanKenobi

Damn cliffhanger, I cant wait anymore! You are by far one of my favorite writers have been for years since I found you on literotica like a decade ago or something. Please keep up the good work and, just being a bit selfish here, write as fast as you can to get more out.

Gregory Sullivan

man, you really left it there? you gotta prioritize getting these next chapters out fast, this is gonna keep me up at night! I need resolution!!

Harmonizing

I definitely want to come back and leave my thoughts on a chapter by chapter basis, but damn! BTB, you continually remind me why you are one of the three /four authors I can always count on giving me an amazing story to read. AMA continues to be one of my top two favorite serial stories I'm reading (Fantasy's Oliver branch of spirit of lust being the other. BDA's story lines are a super close third) Anyways, can't heart this enough. Great set. I'll write more when I'm not exhausted.

Shadracht

Gods, I know, what a cliffhanger!

Jason Hatter

Oh my WORD that was a super satisfying chapter but ALSO such a cliff to leave it hanging on! At last, the long awaited confrontation approaches! Keep up the good work my guy, I can’t wait (I really can’t) to read more! 😄

Yitzhak Brill

I'm going to try and smash out another OFG and AMA release fast, followed by ending the month with an FoF and QT:NW. Cheers!

BreaktheBar