Quaranteam: North West Chapter 18 (Beta)
Added 2023-09-06 00:26:43 +0000 UTCThe following story is based on the fantast
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Oooh, this is a good continuity catch! I'll make a note to look into it for when I look at doing a big bundle with fresh edits.
BreaktheBar
2025-03-20 03:51:30 +0000 UTCCaught a potential oops - you mentioned in chapter 17 that he was shot in the right leg, but here it states left leg. Is that accurate?
M
2025-03-19 17:13:13 +0000 UTCThe 6 month bit was great!
Metadi
2023-09-09 10:52:22 +0000 UTClove it
Cynthia Parker
2023-09-08 21:26:58 +0000 UTCDamn, what a way to both start and end a chapter! So much to appreciate here, from seeing both his personal character growth and his personal relationships grow ever deeper. I can easily see this story becoming a long runner, but itโs definitely becoming harder to wait for each chapter!
Yitzhak Brill
2023-09-07 02:31:19 +0000 UTCI agree, except even 3 weeks between is pushing my limits.๐ Great chapter. Stay safe.
Admiral Ale
2023-09-06 08:29:02 +0000 UTCoooh goodie. Beats reading the newspaper at breakfast ๐
Kahunabob
2023-09-06 05:43:17 +0000 UTCYou and your damn cliffhangers!!!!! Excellent installment!!!
Rick Shirer
2023-09-06 03:07:19 +0000 UTC
