AMA: The Boyfriend: Chapter 227-240 (Double Release)
Added 2023-08-11 03:25:27 +0000 UTCChapter 227
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To many story lines. U all Stay safe.
Admiral Ale
2023-08-16 03:36:16 +0000 UTCDamn, what a satisfying sequence of chapters! I love seeing how his dalliance with Trixie wasn’t just a cheap fling, but they had legitimate chemistry despite being in two very different paths in life. It was really heartwarming as much as it was sexy. And it’s nice how they endeavored to stay in touch afterward. Also, it’s been a long time coming, but holy hell was it both heartbreaking and satisfying to see Cattie finally break up with Heather. What a messy situation, and I can’t wait to see the drama that comes from the aftermath. Yeah, Heather definitely went too far hooking up with Sherry, and that kind of betrayal cuts deep. While I don’t hold any hope that Heather is redeemable, I do hope that Sherry at least has enough self-awareness to know she crossed a line. Or maybe she’ll end up spurning her sisterhood and replacing her as Heather’s new squeeze. Either way, it’s bound to cause some interesting developments for the rest of the story. And as for Ginny, she may be a bit shallow and sex crazed, but letting Cattie know what happened was an admirable move on her part. I have the feeling Ginny didn’t expect Heather to go that far either. It seems the expectation everyone had there was that simply Ginny would hook up with Heather. In any case, thanks for the chapters, and I already can’t wait until we see more!
Yitzhak Brill
2023-08-14 07:51:15 +0000 UTCI hope Tanya shows up again and they both get what they fantasized about. Maybe she moves closer to them and joins in permanently.
Eric
2023-08-13 19:08:18 +0000 UTCYou're the first, lol. Nice catch!
BreaktheBar
2023-08-12 15:14:14 +0000 UTCI don't think anybody mentioned it but I appreciate what I assume is the FoF reference when Trixie talks about sex wizards and how it's not a cult
Gregory Price
2023-08-12 13:51:31 +0000 UTCNo one ever votes for her in the Polls! If it happens again she might leave this trip without gettin' the D.
BreaktheBar
2023-08-12 04:58:19 +0000 UTCWell, we all saw ages ago how that was going to go down but oh the timing. Perfection. Eagerly awaiting the next set of chapters. Oh, and for heaven's sake have some pity on Zenya soon!
Grayghost
2023-08-12 04:46:01 +0000 UTCThis is my number 1 story that’s I’ve read in past 3 yrs. I’m so looking forward to how everyone treats Heather in the morning I hope they make her walk the plank lol.
Jim lynch
2023-08-12 04:29:12 +0000 UTCYeah, I've fixed them in my notes for posting to CHYOA, and I'll get them cleared out here soon. Just juggling a lot of utility stuff right now! Thanks for the notes!
BreaktheBar
2023-08-12 04:08:09 +0000 UTC/spoiler I can't decide if I'm more looking forward to the resolution to the cliffhanger confronting Heather, the cliffhanger for the domination, or my expectation that Tanya/Trixie has the same perk that Robbie does and you're working toward some kind of conflict with a local app user. I like all of your stories enough that I'm annoyed when the new post for all of them ends, even Unexpected Affections.
FlareNight
2023-08-12 04:04:39 +0000 UTCThere are a couple second person paragraphs left, both where Robbie talks to Ami, it
Addeand
2023-08-12 03:16:09 +0000 UTCGreat last few chapters to kick off this part of the saga. Looking forward to the next set.
zktvo
2023-08-11 23:38:30 +0000 UTC*chef's kiss*
Ronan
2023-08-11 21:10:55 +0000 UTCThe chapters can’t come fast enough. You have me like a little kid with candy where I can’t get enough fast enough. Glad that Cattie is finally done with Heather and all in with Robbie and gang. I did notice in chapter 239 is says that Sherry is Cattie’s step-sister when I thought you mentioned before they were half sisters?
Nick
2023-08-11 15:41:26 +0000 UTCGreat job was waitiing and hoping she would kick Heather to the curb, well rouned twist and turns keep up the great work!
Psychopuppy
2023-08-11 12:50:20 +0000 UTCWow, what an amazing double feature. Love what you did with the club, but am thoroughly tickled pink that Cattie is finally working towards a solution with Heather. Thank you for that.
Ben
2023-08-11 09:52:11 +0000 UTCPlease make sure to be careful with quick spoilers in comments. I can usually ignore them but quick 1 liners right below the download link sometimes catch me. Wish you could hide comment preview.
Terrik392
2023-08-11 07:49:43 +0000 UTCEven when you double the chapters it's never enough. That was an awesome post!
SovietDegendays
2023-08-11 05:23:46 +0000 UTCuuugh, I knew I forgot to do something. I forget to do my 2nd Person checks. I'll get that done.
BreaktheBar
2023-08-11 04:50:34 +0000 UTCLove you too buddy :P
BreaktheBar
2023-08-11 04:49:40 +0000 UTCGreat work as always. Glad Cattie is done with Heather.
Jeff Hughes
2023-08-11 04:48:28 +0000 UTCHoly hell, Break. You've outdone yourself. I loved the club scenes even the sex with Trisha. The mix between what he wanted, and what they both could actually do - I could see her making a reappearance in the future after everyone's home. The firing of the checkov's slutty sister was long in coming, but the timing was perfect. And that Heather has finally torpedoed that relationship with a finality that could only have been triggered by fucking Sherry. And now, I desperately look forward to what I know will be a scorchingly hot scene where he claims every part of Cattie. And every time I think about this chunk of chapters, there's more I love. The Ami relationship, and her sheer acrobatic routine on the pole, and how deliberately Robbie loves her, and brings out the best in her. This is probably my favorite ongoing story among all of the various serial stories I'm reading. So, so good!
Shadracht
2023-08-11 04:44:36 +0000 UTCThanks for the great stuff. I do wish we hadn't had the stripper sex - I actually skimmed most of it, because I don't feel that it fits Robbie, and I'm going to be skipping it on any future rereads. The rest of it, though, especially the Catherine situation, just wow. I didn't remember that Sherry was her step-sister, tho. You do need to go back over and edit this, though - there were a few times you slipped into second person, like the entire second paragraph.
Jason Hatter
2023-08-11 04:14:45 +0000 UTCchapter 240 where Cat wants to be dominated, it says something something without complete trust, but it should be with complete trust. It's late 6am I'm about to pass out sorry. good double release, I want more thanks love you gn
Mask
2023-08-11 04:13:09 +0000 UTCThese chapters took way longer than I expected, but several ended up much longer than usual too. Big stuff happening. General FYI - Next up I'm going to spin out a fast new set of OFG, then AMA, then FOF.
BreaktheBar
2023-08-11 03:26:28 +0000 UTC
