Quaranteam: North West Chapter 19 (Alpha)
Added 2023-07-27 06:28:48 +0000 UTCThe following story is based on the fantast
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But I enjoyed the chapter and wait eagerly for the next installment!
Michael Gilbert
2023-08-09 20:43:02 +0000 UTCAlso how Abi, Josie and Melina join him in the showers, you have Spencer instead of Josie
Michael Gilbert
2023-08-09 20:42:00 +0000 UTCSo will the dog eventually get a sailor costume? Harri is Native American, Kyla's his deputy, and Vanessa is a construction worker, so either sailor or biker right?
Ronan
2023-07-28 03:36:17 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter. Less of a cliffhanger. Looking forward to more. Two points - After Harri and Spencer talk, I think you meant 'Spencer took all of five minutes...' Also, The two families on hand for the talk, I think you meant to help *answer* questions, not ask.
Ronan
2023-07-27 22:04:11 +0000 UTCAwww nooo. I thought about it like 3 times while I was away from my computer. I forgot to mention Macho! He'll definitely get added into the next draft.
BreaktheBar
2023-07-27 16:51:13 +0000 UTCThat's definitely meant to be Abi and Josie. I'll get it fixed.
BreaktheBar
2023-07-27 16:50:25 +0000 UTCbookmark
JC
2023-07-27 10:13:09 +0000 UTCBack to our regularly scheduled program. Also at a point you mention Spencer not knowing much about the after shower routine with abi and spencer... I think that's a typo tho it could just be me reading this at near 4am.
SovietDegendays
2023-07-27 07:25:15 +0000 UTC
