Font of Fertility Ch. 23 (Alpha)
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~Break.
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So uh, apart from all the corrections people are pointing out, if you genuinely don’t have an Idea for explaining Victorious, Jerry or one of the girls could have entered him into a competition at a mall or something and he won the car. That way he got it by random chance, in an explainable way to the rents and everyone else in the non magical community and there’s next to no handwavium to do. Jerry obviously has a license so he’s not except from the prize and you don’t need that much backstory on car or money for it short of fuel that’s not getting filled and rego.
Vindictator1972
2023-09-27 18:16:32 +0000 UTC"Mmmmf!", Jordan hummed on your cock....should be "my cock".
Mehntal1st
2023-09-06 16:29:59 +0000 UTChttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1yqVD0swvWU
BreaktheBar
2023-07-06 13:14:11 +0000 UTCRemember that Stacey was raised by Jerry's parents, but they are her Godparents. The relationships were changed because of certain sites.
BreaktheBar
2023-07-06 13:09:34 +0000 UTC"you’ll have a Gandalf and the Eagles situation on your hand - he could just fix the whole plot by himself" what's the reference here, that Gandalf should have solved Frodo's problems? What's the answer to that for Tolkien?
JC
2023-07-06 08:45:12 +0000 UTC"found out about Stacey and I" should be "found out about Stacey and me" - also, Stacey shouldn't refer to their parents as "your parents"
JC
2023-07-06 08:31:55 +0000 UTCThere isn't an official list out there yet, but in super brief... Jerry = North America/Greenland/Caribbean Esmerelda = Central/South America Yaroslav = Northern Asia (Russia) and Australia Ndia = Eastern Africa (at least) Marcel = Western Africa Xi Zhuang = China/East Asia? Uwe = Europe? Genghis Khan = Central/South East Asia?
BreaktheBar
2023-07-06 06:49:37 +0000 UTCdo we have a list of which seat controls which region? Yaroslav is Australia, Jerry is N America, Esme is C/S America, and there's one seat missing, leaving five for Africa/China/Russia/Europe/Middle East?
JC
2023-07-06 06:06:14 +0000 UTCNoted on the missed wording! But maybe Jerry HAS a winger? Did you think of that? :P I'll keep your thoughts in mind on the scene. Let's see what some other folks think too!
BreaktheBar
2023-07-05 18:40:22 +0000 UTCSpeculate away! I know where I'm going with things, but reader theories are ALWAYS fun to read about and seeing discussion between you folks gets my endorphins up because it let's me know people are invested.
BreaktheBar
2023-07-05 18:35:45 +0000 UTCSmall mistake when Jerry is kissing Jordan of saying tongue and tongue piercing instead of i assume tongue and lip piercing. Also later on when the fingering starts with winger instead of finger. Regarding the truncated scene, while it would have been nice to get the dirty details on every plundered hole, it could have at least been capped off with an explicit note about Jerry pumping her full in both remaining holes before leaving instead of just the implicit callbacks in the next conversation. You might even have been able to slice some of the details out of that conversation and just have the girls talk about "we know what you did, Jordan sent a pic oozing your seed from every hole" to call back
Zaralith
2023-07-05 18:11:45 +0000 UTCIt's really interesting how Esmerelda didnt come dressed fancy. I've got some theories going on about her, but dont know how you feel about speculation. Either way, fun chapter!
Krysm Phoenix
2023-07-05 18:10:01 +0000 UTC
