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Quaranteam: North West Chapter 18 (Alpha)

The following story is based on the fantast

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The punch happened out of sight, and Harri left soon after. No time for the shiner to show. Do the ladies even know about the punch?

Ronan

Ok, this is bugging the crap out if me… the girls cut Harri off at the balls for his actions, which were him being a nice guy and lending a hand when needed - one of the things they all claim to love about him. Then apparently have no problem with Leo clocking their disabled man? In the face no less? So broken nose is no big deal? Black eyes are a-ok? Really? Not one word said about it? Boy, I’m glad my woman doesn’t love me like his do. My woman, who really loves me and not just my juice, would have been kicking the balls of even her brother if he did that to me. In other words, I can go after my man, but you keep your hands off him.

OkieDokeDude

I really liked the nuances regarding Harri's altruism and the needs of the Team. He's not wrong, but neither is Erica. The last two excursions could have been handled just as well without him. (The road trip probably would have needed a lot of favors for lunch. Dude is going to need to cater her retirement party at this rate.)

Krysm Phoenix

Quaranteam: NW is the story that brought me here. It and AMA remain my favorite two. Love this chapter and will be gutted if I have to wait as long on this cliff hanger as the last one. I’ve got a theory on the Dani situation as well and cannot wait to see if it plays out like I think it will

Revan

I'm thinking it's the survivalists that Harri ran into at the store, the ones Mary moved in with.

Jason Hatter

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JC

NGL shower scene was hot but seemed out of place after them talking about taking risks. Thought we would have another Vanessa incident for sure. Also wtf happened with the other chick damn you!!!

SovietDegendays

Boo cliffhanger. I was worried this would result in another accident like vee, but it wasn't. Interested in figuring out about the attack (maybe the local tribal outcasts or some of the bikers) and what happened with Spencer

Zaralith

(1) So, easing Kyla into multi? (2) Daaaammmnn it. ALL these cliffhangers!!! Its so good though. Just don't leave us hangin so long dude!

Ronan

Or maybe it was for Erica O.o Dun dun DUUNNNN!

BreaktheBar

Yeah, Dani has it bad for Hari

Jason Hatter