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OnlyFans Girl: Chapter 215-221

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Sorry for the inconvenience, hopefully all will be righted soon.

~Break.

Comments

I think - judging by the following paragraphs - it's supposed to be the name of the first(second)-person protagonist, so it's supposed to be "John". By the way, same typo in the epub file.

AlWo Ra

FYI, small typo: "I want to watch {first]..." I think that's supposed a "you".

Tetsuo

This was a great chapter. It moved things forwards with revealing the "big secret" to Katherine, it had some great character moments between Gemma and John at the cafe. It had a scorching sex scene with peanut gallery. It had a little bit of the work stuff, with no new drama coming there, just reminding us it existed while hanging a few possible threads - Joy, Eric becoming an issue with his desire for fame - out there. And then the "cliffhanger" (if you want to call it that) about setting up an on-camera threesome is intriguing. All in all, a great read!

Shadracht

Hell yeah!

Mask


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