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AMA: The Boyfriend: Chapter 97-110 (Double Release)

Chapter 97

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It's feeling really special, Jim. I gotta hope I can keep up the quality and it doesn't get stale or over-worked because I really love a lot of the characters.

BreaktheBar

Yes, you = me. Writing AMA after writing OFG can mess with my mind sometimes and I occasionally miss an edit. Thanks for pointing it out! I'll get it cleaned up.

BreaktheBar

"Gas Girl gave you and Cassidy a look, and then another more considering one." you = me*** ???

Kakwann

You mean when they get gas on the way back lol.

Jim lynch

That is perfectly put I couldn’t have voiced my opinion any different than yours it’s like you read my mind and Patreon account lol.

Jim lynch

This is my favourite story on literotica and Patreon by a mile now we are a good way into the story. I feel I know the character’s really well now who I love who I like and heather Lol.

Jim lynch

I loved the random madison encounter and would love to have her re-pop up later out of nowhere once we have all forgotten about her

This was a great double set of chapters. I didn't *love* the Madison encounter, but you covered that in story, and Robbie's reaction after the post-nut clarity was very similar to my own. It *was* hot, but Robbie really isn't into the casual hook-up thing. He _cares_, which is part of what makes him awesome, and a big part of what's making him fall in love with Wanda (and probably Becca, once they have more time). The writing is sublime. You have characters with agency, who are all different, and even the non-sexual parts of it are well worth reading about. I love this story, maybe even more than I love the FOF, even though that's epic in its own way. Keep up the great work, Break. You're my most expensive patreon, but it's worth it. You were sorely missed for the years you were gone from the erotic fiction scene. ETA: I kind of hate Sherry, but she's really just a kid, and I'm sure she has Heather spitting poison into her ear. My money is still on Heather screwing Sherry, and that finally (finally!) ending the Heather / Cattie relationship. I don't *hate* Heather, but she's really a selfish (probably narcissistic) bitch. Cattie deserves more (like being part of a throuple (quadruple? quintuple? (Cassie, Becca, Wanda, Cattie, Robbie))).

Shadracht

Hey folks! Tiny update here without sending out a new post. I feel like it's out of style at this point, but COVID hit my house this week. Everyone is fine, it was just a few sucky days. I'm back up and running. AS planned, expect another regular OFG release next, followed by AMA, followed by a chapter of FoF. That should bring us into next week! Cheers!

BreaktheBar


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