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OnlyFans Girl: Chapter 131-137

The content of this post has been removed for the time being as I, Break, make sure that the story fully complies with Patreon ToS and does not risk my platform. If this post has not been edited back into existence after some time, assume that the content has been made available in a larger bundle.

Sorry for the inconvenience, hopefully all will be righted soon.

~Break.

Comments

It's just the lead up to the 'actual scene' coming out tomorrow. John and Sabrina are falling into a relationship pattern and I wanted to make that apparent without spending a bunch of time on what is basically a repetitive sex sequence. The mention of it will be even shorter, maybe only a sentence or two, the next time as it becomes the expected for John, which makes more room for new/novel experiences to be the focus of the sex scenes.

BreaktheBar

You know I love your work bro, but that last bit there with Sabrina felt the tiniest bit forced, like you got to a point and realized there wasn't a scorching hot scene in this release. I'm just saying. Not that it wasn't satisfying, just that the context... I didn't feel the connection to the rest of the chapter. (er, chapters?) Anyway, like the office drama so far. Can hardly wait for Joy and her Mommy to go down in flames. πŸ™ƒ

Zeke NoScooter_8

Nah I got confused by something else I posted that comment at some ungodly hour.

SovietDegendays

Not sure what you mean. I definitely remembered to replace the name tags with the proper names this time, which I forget occasionally. Did I miss something?

BreaktheBar

Choya version?

SovietDegendays


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