AMA: The Boyfriend - Chapter 1-10
Added 2022-09-02 07:21:49 +0000 UTCThe following chapters are the opening of a
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At first I was hesitant to read this particular story because I don't really care for stories about infidelity unless the cheater is in a toxic relationship or it is going to be a burn-the-bastard/bitch story and mind control stories don't do anything but creep me out. However, I've enjoyed everything else of Break's that I've read, so after reading his preface, I decided to trust him and give it a shot. Am I aver glad that I did. I binged all the published chapters over the last 24 hours and I'm hooked!
Loneshot
2023-02-11 15:57:58 +0000 UTCWoof. That was actually worse than I worried it would be in places. Thanks again for pointing that out, Patient1! Everything is edited here, now I just need to go edit the CHYOA postings too.
BreaktheBar
2022-09-06 04:12:33 +0000 UTCThis is happening because of writing OnlyFans Girl, hahaha. I will take another editing pass - I thought I'd cleared it up, but maybe I missed some. Thanks for pointing it out!
BreaktheBar
2022-09-06 00:06:35 +0000 UTCI really like the story and the revisions. However, it tends to waiver between the I and You points of view, which is an immersion breaker. Otherwise- as usual, the women are fascinating, and the writing is excellent.
patient1
2022-09-05 22:33:59 +0000 UTC
