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Erection of the Runelords Bk 1 Ch 3-4 (Beta)

A night of debauchery following a running b

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The pacing and balancing being difficult makes sense.

Ian B

I'd really love to get back to this story at some point, it's just a really big time suck and I worry about the pacing a lot with balancing four different characters.

BreaktheBar

I upgraded my subscription earlier then planned so I could read these chapter. Just couldn’t wait. And I wasn’t disappointed. I love the way the four stories merge but it doesn’t feel hamfisted or manufactured. And bravo on keeping them in close proximity but apart for the sexy time

Ian B