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Death Becomes You 466

i tried 2 b bold with the formatting on this one and it was a lil too ambitious (no constructive critique plz ill fix it when my brain's working better thnzzzz)

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Death Becomes You 466

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Such a sweet walk and talk

D'Artagnan Wayland

I like the pretty tones on this page :0

Shinju

This makes me hope gwen and kalan get a little more time together soon. Its been a long time for them and kalans the kind of guy to get really emotional about missing someone i bet

Jennifer Lee

I started reading the comments after I read the comic and had not read the description. So I read it just fine.

Milady Moody

I love this formatting, the speech bubbles make it obvious that they are moving along the path in the long panel on the left. It’s cool and informative

Priestess.of.Pleasure

I love the mooooons

rasvimhia

I think its cool

C

I think the formatting is fine! Since you color code the speech bubbles by character, it's going to be easy to follow, even in webtoons' format.

wolfywox

ILOVEIT😩

_Pogona_

I loved the layout on this one I found it really easy to follow❤️

Dmars

It's so pretty... I like this layout creativity very much, but I can see how if you are trying to work out how to break it down for the webtoons scrolling format it might be giving you a headache. I just love the way their speech bubbles meander down the path as they do.

Kate Alvarez Anderson

My sweet boy. I'll protect you. I appreciate the slow burn immensely.

Grægori

How about constructive compliments? Because this looks really good to me!

Fox

feral rodent XDDD

legut

Acting as if her brain didnt completely explode when when she realized she fondled a demi-god for the first time hehe

A Demon (Subtle)

I really like the way this one flows actually. I honestly don't think it needs fixing at all.

Stefani Nunya

I'm loving the visual flow of the dialog!!

Oli Platt

Format is great! Color coding works out perfectly

Aurora77106

"It's not serious he just ticks all the boxes and I wanna keep banging him indefinitely"

FrankensteinsMonsterFriend

gwen pretending like it’s not Serious™️ but leaving aleksei a five star yelp review…. I see you girl

I like the format

PlantQueen

Kalan, intimidating yes, but you still want him

Alex

Honestly, i am so used to the gwennifer nicknames that i thought Gwendolyn was another one of them lol

Kitsune Ana

But I will say the background with the moons is GORGEOUS 😍

ramoth

I can't get over the feral rodent comment 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

ramoth

Critique? I see nothing to Critique, this looks amazing!! 😍

CrazyCryptid

Kalan…read the room honey

Ruby_Solstice27


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