Death Becomes You 466
Added 2025-08-11 18:40:24 +0000 UTCi tried 2 b bold with the formatting on this one and it was a lil too ambitious (no constructive critique plz ill fix it when my brain's working better thnzzzz)
Comments
Such a sweet walk and talk
D'Artagnan Wayland
2025-08-17 18:30:48 +0000 UTCI like the pretty tones on this page :0
Shinju
2025-08-15 12:14:25 +0000 UTCThis makes me hope gwen and kalan get a little more time together soon. Its been a long time for them and kalans the kind of guy to get really emotional about missing someone i bet
Jennifer Lee
2025-08-13 14:42:08 +0000 UTCI started reading the comments after I read the comic and had not read the description. So I read it just fine.
Milady Moody
2025-08-13 13:19:48 +0000 UTCI love this formatting, the speech bubbles make it obvious that they are moving along the path in the long panel on the left. It’s cool and informative
Priestess.of.Pleasure
2025-08-13 12:43:59 +0000 UTCI love the mooooons
rasvimhia
2025-08-12 18:58:16 +0000 UTCI think its cool
C
2025-08-12 17:45:54 +0000 UTCI think the formatting is fine! Since you color code the speech bubbles by character, it's going to be easy to follow, even in webtoons' format.
wolfywox
2025-08-12 07:17:27 +0000 UTCILOVEIT😩
_Pogona_
2025-08-12 05:01:25 +0000 UTCI loved the layout on this one I found it really easy to follow❤️
Dmars
2025-08-12 02:29:19 +0000 UTCIt's so pretty... I like this layout creativity very much, but I can see how if you are trying to work out how to break it down for the webtoons scrolling format it might be giving you a headache. I just love the way their speech bubbles meander down the path as they do.
Kate Alvarez Anderson
2025-08-12 01:15:43 +0000 UTCMy sweet boy. I'll protect you. I appreciate the slow burn immensely.
Grægori
2025-08-12 00:27:45 +0000 UTCHow about constructive compliments? Because this looks really good to me!
Fox
2025-08-11 21:58:39 +0000 UTCferal rodent XDDD
legut
2025-08-11 20:29:51 +0000 UTCActing as if her brain didnt completely explode when when she realized she fondled a demi-god for the first time hehe
A Demon (Subtle)
2025-08-11 19:39:05 +0000 UTCI really like the way this one flows actually. I honestly don't think it needs fixing at all.
Stefani Nunya
2025-08-11 19:25:03 +0000 UTCI'm loving the visual flow of the dialog!!
Oli Platt
2025-08-11 19:21:05 +0000 UTCFormat is great! Color coding works out perfectly
Aurora77106
2025-08-11 19:20:29 +0000 UTC"It's not serious he just ticks all the boxes and I wanna keep banging him indefinitely"
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2025-08-11 19:04:04 +0000 UTCgwen pretending like it’s not Serious™️ but leaving aleksei a five star yelp review…. I see you girl
☆
2025-08-11 19:03:10 +0000 UTCI like the format
PlantQueen
2025-08-11 18:52:42 +0000 UTCKalan, intimidating yes, but you still want him
Alex
2025-08-11 18:47:07 +0000 UTCHonestly, i am so used to the gwennifer nicknames that i thought Gwendolyn was another one of them lol
Kitsune Ana
2025-08-11 18:45:52 +0000 UTCBut I will say the background with the moons is GORGEOUS 😍
ramoth
2025-08-11 18:45:47 +0000 UTCI can't get over the feral rodent comment 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
ramoth
2025-08-11 18:44:49 +0000 UTCCritique? I see nothing to Critique, this looks amazing!! 😍
CrazyCryptid
2025-08-11 18:44:48 +0000 UTCKalan…read the room honey
Ruby_Solstice27
2025-08-11 18:42:52 +0000 UTC
