EDIT: Pomegranate Redux Pages 1-17 (NSFW)
Added 2025-03-04 20:19:27 +0000 UTCEDIT: I updated the borders and contrast of the first 16 pages and removed panels that I forgot to
Page 17 is the new one, where it transitions to Demeter's perspective. I will be reposting old pages as I make changes alongside the new pages/panels, so there's an easy to follow consistent narrative that will all be within the redux collection. I'm keeping the original narrative on here in its own collection!
Currently I'm keeping as much of the old art as I can, which will lead to some art inconsistencies but I may go back and update this opening scene art at some point.
Comments
Hehehe, "wait, is that Persephone?" XD
Shinju
2025-03-17 23:55:25 +0000 UTCVery fun to revisit the start
D'Artagnan Wayland
2025-03-14 15:38:07 +0000 UTCHah! I'm taking credit even if you figured it out yourself 😆 All joking aside, it looks much smoother!
NormalGamerGal
2025-03-10 23:52:29 +0000 UTCWERE BACK BITCHES(BITCHEES??)
Captain McDreamboat
2025-03-05 21:53:31 +0000 UTCWow the lighting and background changes elevate the scene so much!! Love that addition
Amber
2025-03-05 20:17:49 +0000 UTCThat was HOT!!
Shannon
2025-03-05 17:58:19 +0000 UTCIt's actually really cool to see the changes between the old version and the little recent edits. It's a living piece of art still in progress.
Stolby
2025-03-05 16:35:00 +0000 UTCI forgot how much I wanted to worship the bad bitch that is Olympia 😤🙏💖
Cheshka
2025-03-05 13:26:08 +0000 UTCIt's crazy to see your art skill level up!!! So impressive 🩷
Alex M
2025-03-05 04:53:18 +0000 UTCUghhhhhh can’t wait to see the new portrayal of Demeter! I feel like I haven’t seen many different takes on her
Cory
2025-03-05 04:41:23 +0000 UTC🤪🤭 wooopsies, didn’t mean to put any pressure tho — genuinely thought it could’ve been related to Zeus antagonism or smth
Karla
2025-03-05 04:20:13 +0000 UTCNOPE I FORGOT ABOUT THAT and missed it when skimming over I'll have to fix that tomorrow gjsjfnskfj
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2025-03-05 03:42:05 +0000 UTCohhhh so will the "fool" panel in page 5 turn into some other narrative?
Karla
2025-03-05 02:35:13 +0000 UTCIt might just be me but i really enjoy how yur art foes from HOT PPL HAVING SEX ——to—— appreciation of the naked body male or female. I might be thinking too hard. ITS JUST SO PRETTY
101kpm2
2025-03-05 02:15:49 +0000 UTCOn looking at it closer, I think the main thing that caught me off guard was the changing the background between panels straight from the sepia to black. Not sure the best way to make it flow better, but I think that might be all it is.
NormalGamerGal
2025-03-05 01:57:21 +0000 UTCSo excited! You may want to slightly rework some of the panels between the old and new so it's a little less jarring, but I think I mostly noticed because I knew what I was looking for 😆 In any case, this looks great
NormalGamerGal
2025-03-05 01:54:34 +0000 UTCI love that you are continuing this comic. 🥰
V
2025-03-05 01:06:17 +0000 UTCWait just so I completely understand so I can correctly follow the story changes: is this now the beginning again (aka this is now page 1 on)? Like are these panels where the whole pomegranate story begins and it’s starting over and being reworked from there? So excited for you to make the storyline more true to yourself and how you envisioned it!🫶
T
2025-03-05 00:30:28 +0000 UTCSo much work, but I'm glad it's back in your control!
Emily McMichael
2025-03-04 23:03:55 +0000 UTCRTMSGRLPLTS
Firesoarer
2025-03-04 22:16:23 +0000 UTCAcantha is a scheming little nymph. Wait until Apollo hears about this. 😅😆
M L
2025-03-04 21:58:49 +0000 UTCI sincerely love this for you. Ty for making it true to what you wanted.
Quixlix
2025-03-04 21:26:36 +0000 UTCI forgot how hot and hilarious this comic is 🥰🥰
Colie Kai
2025-03-04 21:25:33 +0000 UTCIm so excited
ZoaNoe
2025-03-04 21:24:17 +0000 UTCI'm loving this! 🩷 It's been a while since I restarted Pom. Now with the new point of view, it will be fantastic.
KixOnyx
2025-03-04 21:18:37 +0000 UTCI think it's a great idea to keep the old narrative in a separate place as you redo things to your own desires. Your work is so great.
Fox
2025-03-04 20:57:48 +0000 UTCBro the amount of levelling up that has occurred. I'm so fucking hype.
Em
2025-03-04 20:53:18 +0000 UTCLoveee the way you draw the big view in the last page it's sooo pretty
Amber
2025-03-04 20:46:54 +0000 UTCThe opening scene in your new art style would be unstoppable
Amber
2025-03-04 20:46:24 +0000 UTCI forgot how hot the opening was to this. Mmmmmm
Earathar
2025-03-04 20:44:38 +0000 UTCmaybe I won't read it in front of my mother right here ...
univcorn
2025-03-04 20:40:57 +0000 UTCAhhhh yes ty sm
Helen Billings
2025-03-04 20:36:44 +0000 UTCLove an excuse to reread this
KizzyAnel
2025-03-04 20:36:10 +0000 UTCeeeee! I LOVE seeing the old art vs newer art❤️!!!
Starflight The Demon Cat
2025-03-04 20:36:09 +0000 UTCholy shit the glow up on p18
Sarah
2025-03-04 20:34:07 +0000 UTCHey Acantha, snitches get stitches 🥰 the color change between Perse's scene and Demeter's is really neat. I love the way you use color.
Pachouli Fish
2025-03-04 20:31:12 +0000 UTCEspecially with the older pages the organization of the comic pages can make it really hard to read through. Since you're reposting could hyperlinks be added potentially? Patreon has gotten actively more difficult to navigate page-by-page in the last year or so, and the original postings of these earlier pages are often next to impossible for me to find, which makes re-reading hard. Especially since both of your comics are fairly long form it might just help things overall to start with that earlier into reposting it.
Ceci Dillon
2025-03-04 20:30:46 +0000 UTCIt's wild to see how much your art has changed over the years. I love it! I'm excited for this journey!
Krista
2025-03-04 20:29:58 +0000 UTCOh noooo *drama* we HAVE to read Pom from the BEGINNING AGAIN?! *swoon* like it’s the first time?!? Pooooor usssss 😈😈
Mol
2025-03-04 20:28:07 +0000 UTCLet’s fuckin go
Michaela Gadwall
2025-03-04 20:27:35 +0000 UTC
