Death Becomes You 201
Added 2023-09-13 03:18:36 +0000 UTCiTs FiNe GwEn JuSt AlWaYs GeTs WhAt ShE wAnTs
I had originally ended this scene on the previous page but it was way too abrupt and Aleksei isn't really the type to just take bullshit so I'm having to work in 6 extra pages between the last batch and the batch I already finished inking rip
Comments
Mooooooore pleeeeeeease
Margie
2023-09-15 23:34:14 +0000 UTCdo you ever write both sides of a conversation? by that I mean write it from one perspective, then the other, and see if it still works?
Quixlix
2023-09-14 04:15:23 +0000 UTC[Eyebrow waggle]
Shinju
2023-09-13 16:57:30 +0000 UTCSo many answers to that, Gwen
Vesper
2023-09-13 16:51:41 +0000 UTCHahah all the extra work but it will be worth it. The story is great so far and I love seeing this back and forth!
Denise Osborne
2023-09-13 13:36:01 +0000 UTCGood sass point
D'Artagnan Wayland
2023-09-13 13:11:43 +0000 UTCFranky, I just gotta say this comic makes my day everytime you post. I try so much to let it build up so I can binge an update and I fail every single time. Its so freaking good and fun and the characters are so dynamic and loveable! The plot is interesting and keeps me hooked! The art is fantasic and easy to read (sooo many comics are unreadable because the page layout is a nightmare to make sense of). I really hope it, and you!, get the love and attention it deserves in the future.
Just a Mad Garbage Toad-cat
2023-09-13 12:24:15 +0000 UTCAaaah haha, oh man. That makes perfect sense
folklore translator
2023-09-13 05:58:42 +0000 UTCAlthough sometimes quitting is the right thing to do, as Aleksei has astutely identified in this case.
Versrii
2023-09-13 05:36:40 +0000 UTCExactly!
Versrii
2023-09-13 05:35:17 +0000 UTCLove leads who never challenge each other are for quitters ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-09-13 05:32:15 +0000 UTCI feel like the original scene ending I wrote is how Gwen thought the conversation would go and the rewrite is reality vnskfkdjxbdj
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-09-13 05:31:23 +0000 UTC"I may be insulting the man but I'd still hit that in a second"
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-09-13 05:29:42 +0000 UTCGood! I'm glad you're giving Aleksei the space to be himself, so to say. I'm glad he's not a pushover, and Gwen needs someone to tell her when she's being a brat and an idiot.
Versrii
2023-09-13 05:20:22 +0000 UTCWhat do you have to do? Careful, the wolf might have demands of his own in this barter ๐ค
Cheshka
2023-09-13 04:12:39 +0000 UTCgwen ๐โน๏ธ
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2023-09-13 04:03:23 +0000 UTCouf, want to say thank you for the rework. So tired of abrupt scene endings for the sake of abrupt scene endings when they're not in character. glad to see a fellow writer working through this
folklore translator
2023-09-13 04:00:27 +0000 UTCSEXUALFAVORSPLEASE.PLEASELETHIMSAYSEXUALFAVORSPLEASE. AND PLEASE LET HER AGREE.AND PLEASE LET THOSE SIX ADDITIONAL PAGES BE FULL OF GROPIN AND GRINDIN PLEASE.
GLITTERGUM
2023-09-13 03:50:55 +0000 UTCelfussy, please.
ganondork
2023-09-13 03:36:25 +0000 UTCThat is a very loaded question, Gwen. *grabs popcorn anyway*
Niathria
2023-09-13 03:29:26 +0000 UTCalso love him needing to clarify that heโs cute
monica
2023-09-13 03:22:17 +0000 UTCooooooooo!!!!!! i feel the bait and switch coming, but iโm still twirling my hair!!!
monica
2023-09-13 03:21:38 +0000 UTCOh she looks so much like her younger self pouting at the tea party with the snobby girls.
bibibirdy
2023-09-13 03:20:45 +0000 UTC
