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Death Becomes You 163

EDIT: I've decided to remove the top panel and move it to later in this scene for when I explain everyone's relationship! I'll replace it with something else later jkl;sdfnklfsd

After talking to some friends I decided it wasn't portraying things the way I wanted it to come across so it'll come up again later 

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It's easy to fault yourself, though hopeful she goes easy on the drinks

D'Artagnan Wayland

I think the empty space with just the writing looks nice too, it’s a good space for just thoughts.

Pozolegirl

lolol I’ll support her no matter what

Cassie

Not me over here like : please no make her more problematic it gives me life and makes the dynamic with Aleksei fun

Velhari

hmmm yeah i think removing that top panel was a good decision ... like without your author's comments i had no idea what was actually happening there (even with them i had barely any idea lol)

LH

Honestly, the fact that they censor adultery and not war crimes is fucked up, imo.

Versrii

I love the panel of her folded up into herself 🫤 felt that

Yea, you’re probably right. I know most of your characters are in open relationships so I assumed a more in depth explanation to their dynamic was coming at some point.

Cassie

Louie: you can't beat yourself up over this forever Gwen: WATCH ME

C

I agree that malicious adultery is pretty squicky but that's not the angle I'm going for and I think people will feel less squicked out of I lay that out in this scene

FrankensteinsMonsterFriend

It’s your story. I’m just here to enjoy it. And I totally understand on the scale that adultery

Cassie

Nah that's fair. I'll move up the explanation of the relationship so it creeps people out less

FrankensteinsMonsterFriend

It's FICTION! Ugh but don't even get me started on that subject as a whole, absolutely ridiculous. Sorry you had to deal with that.

Pachouli Fish

Lol I never said it made sense.

Cassie

Wack lmao

FrankensteinsMonsterFriend

Look, I’m going to have to support her rights and her wrongs, but cold blooded murder would’ve been easier for me to swallow. lol

Cassie

Oh....wuh oh. Gotta go back and refresh on the early pages x.x

Velhari

I think ginger cutie is the brother in law 😬

Niathria

He's married to Aisling through an arranged marriage!

FrankensteinsMonsterFriend

Oh sweet Gwen!! *hugs* 😭😭😭

Jaded_Mombie

Is it that ginger cutie was Aisling's lover and Gwen was getting with them behind her back? Or is it that Aisling was driven away out of feeling neglected by her sister cause she was always busy being a thottie and ignored her? The latter was my initial impression from the panel

Velhari

oooo...the plot Thickens....

Velhari

They can forgive war crimes but they draw the line at adultery!

FrankensteinsMonsterFriend

Also can I just say how divine she looks in that shade of purple?

Pachouli Fish

That doesn't surprise me...

Pachouli Fish


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