Death Becomes You 163
Added 2023-05-27 01:20:52 +0000 UTC
EDIT: I've decided to remove the top panel and move it to later in this scene for when I explain everyone's relationship! I'll replace it with something else later jkl;sdfnklfsd
After talking to some friends I decided it wasn't portraying things the way I wanted it to come across so it'll come up again later
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It's easy to fault yourself, though hopeful she goes easy on the drinks
D'Artagnan Wayland
2023-05-28 00:10:00 +0000 UTC
I think the empty space with just the writing looks nice too, it’s a good space for just thoughts.
Pozolegirl
2023-05-27 14:29:38 +0000 UTC
lolol I’ll support her no matter what
Cassie
2023-05-27 04:29:28 +0000 UTC
Not me over here like : please no make her more problematic it gives me life and makes the dynamic with Aleksei fun
Velhari
2023-05-27 04:28:09 +0000 UTC
hmmm yeah i think removing that top panel was a good decision ... like without your author's comments i had no idea what was actually happening there (even with them i had barely any idea lol)
LH
2023-05-27 04:22:32 +0000 UTC
Honestly, the fact that they censor adultery and not war crimes is fucked up, imo.
Versrii
2023-05-27 04:09:44 +0000 UTC
I love the panel of her folded up into herself 🫤 felt that
☆
2023-05-27 03:40:08 +0000 UTC
Yea, you’re probably right. I know most of your characters are in open relationships so I assumed a more in depth explanation to their dynamic was coming at some point.
Cassie
2023-05-27 03:29:29 +0000 UTC
Louie: you can't beat yourself up over this forever
Gwen: WATCH ME
C
2023-05-27 03:27:23 +0000 UTC
I agree that malicious adultery is pretty squicky but that's not the angle I'm going for and I think people will feel less squicked out of I lay that out in this scene
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-05-27 03:25:35 +0000 UTC
It’s your story. I’m just here to enjoy it. And I totally understand on the scale that adultery
Cassie
2023-05-27 03:24:18 +0000 UTC
Nah that's fair. I'll move up the explanation of the relationship so it creeps people out less
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-05-27 03:19:15 +0000 UTC
It's FICTION! Ugh but don't even get me started on that subject as a whole, absolutely ridiculous. Sorry you had to deal with that.
Pachouli Fish
2023-05-27 02:38:38 +0000 UTC
Lol I never said it made sense.
Cassie
2023-05-27 02:34:06 +0000 UTC
Wack lmao
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-05-27 02:33:15 +0000 UTC
Look, I’m going to have to support her rights and her wrongs, but cold blooded murder would’ve been easier for me to swallow. lol
Cassie
2023-05-27 02:32:44 +0000 UTC
Oh....wuh oh. Gotta go back and refresh on the early pages x.x
Velhari
2023-05-27 02:29:59 +0000 UTC
I think ginger cutie is the brother in law 😬
Niathria
2023-05-27 02:00:14 +0000 UTC
He's married to Aisling through an arranged marriage!
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-05-27 02:00:05 +0000 UTC
Oh sweet Gwen!! *hugs* 😭😭😭
Jaded_Mombie
2023-05-27 02:00:03 +0000 UTC
Is it that ginger cutie was Aisling's lover and Gwen was getting with them behind her back? Or is it that Aisling was driven away out of feeling neglected by her sister cause she was always busy being a thottie and ignored her? The latter was my initial impression from the panel
Velhari
2023-05-27 01:56:48 +0000 UTC
oooo...the plot Thickens....
Velhari
2023-05-27 01:50:22 +0000 UTC
They can forgive war crimes but they draw the line at adultery!
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-05-27 01:34:10 +0000 UTC
Also can I just say how divine she looks in that shade of purple?
Pachouli Fish
2023-05-27 01:34:05 +0000 UTC
That doesn't surprise me...
Pachouli Fish
2023-05-27 01:33:37 +0000 UTC