Death Becomes You 162
Added 2023-05-26 21:22:57 +0000 UTCAs you can see, the sisters have very different taste in men
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D'Artagnan Wayland
2023-05-28 00:02:08 +0000 UTCMe wanting to be a whore for bothπππ
LanaX
2023-05-27 07:05:40 +0000 UTCIntrigued about the "stole from a god" comment!!! I hunger for the lore
Velhari
2023-05-27 02:34:48 +0000 UTCI love how expressive her ears are in this page
Fi
2023-05-27 01:22:33 +0000 UTC"generally unhinged, completely divorced from the concept of mortality"
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-05-27 00:27:09 +0000 UTCAsking the sisters their type of men: βTall, handsome, powerfulβ
midge
2023-05-27 00:13:18 +0000 UTCI think the color transition when you turn these into webtoons panels will help, but one box in these pages (or even a transition page like last time) might be sufficient. Or just a block of text that reads 'back in feldan' or something?
Jay Farris Bohannon
2023-05-26 23:01:06 +0000 UTCAhhhh
Joanna Strange
2023-05-26 21:47:20 +0000 UTCChekhovβs drunk gwen perhaps infers that sheβll say something forward to a dense werewolf soon π€π
Ella Gallego
2023-05-26 21:46:08 +0000 UTCWhere is Aleksei? π€ Is my first thought now that I realize it's not a flashback.
Versrii
2023-05-26 21:43:09 +0000 UTC*that* chokehold tho
Miss Faithless
2023-05-26 21:39:29 +0000 UTCI did not think it was a flashback. More like a glimpse into what they're up to.
Nicole Wilson
2023-05-26 21:37:29 +0000 UTCI think maybe, and this is probably going to sound cheesy or easy, just adding a line at the top of the first page back in the present would clear it up? Or adding one to signify the flashback and the present day because I was a tad confused when the flashback started too
ohmygoditsgrace
2023-05-26 21:37:07 +0000 UTCThat's fair. I didn't feel like detailing that part of things so I'll probably just slap a "Feldan inn" or some kinda thing placard on the transition page
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-05-26 21:36:23 +0000 UTCI was expecting to see them travel or arrive, tbh. Otherwise I think I'd need it in writing. At first I thought this was a conversation that happened when she decided to go try to get to Ludyc.
Versrii
2023-05-26 21:35:24 +0000 UTCIt was just a time skip to a local hotel which will be established in dialogue a little later. I probably should put a time and place placard somewhere at the transition point
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-05-26 21:34:26 +0000 UTCWhen did they get home?
Joanna Strange
2023-05-26 21:33:17 +0000 UTCI thought it was a flashback too!
Joanna Strange
2023-05-26 21:33:12 +0000 UTCIt's not! What's a better way to demonstrate that?
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-05-26 21:32:57 +0000 UTCOh! This isn't a flashback?!!!
Versrii
2023-05-26 21:31:14 +0000 UTCThe throat hold....ok maybe that pot of gold isnt THAT bad i meannn
ganondork
2023-05-26 21:30:33 +0000 UTC
