Death Becomes You 133
Added 2023-04-03 04:59:48 +0000 UTCthis one made a lot of sense in my head at first but now i realize it may not make much sense to anyone else so uh. good luck.
patch note: tried adjusting sfx and colors to make it easier to tell what's going on
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Thank you for that feedback that does help! I think I was thinking too much about webtoons formatting where it'll flow a lot more naturally and ended up goofing on the trad layout rip
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-04-12 17:03:43 +0000 UTCI think the new edits make it a lot easier to follow! I think the next time you do that kind of zig zag motion flow (which is very cool) the second part could be slightly more elevated from the final pose to draw the eye in the correct order of sequence, just because we're trained to go L>R when things are the same plane? Page orientation level? And in this one Aleksei's landing is "before" where he grabs the corpse just with the orientation on the page
Alex M
2023-04-12 08:18:34 +0000 UTCAnd this is how you give your werewolf bf some top tier enrichment, this really is like a pumpkin full of meat for him lol
Bun
2023-04-06 05:16:03 +0000 UTCFERAL!!! 😍
dnaeri
2023-04-05 19:58:20 +0000 UTCI believe he's jumping while slightly transforming and flipping to land on one of their shoulders, then proceeds to use them as a prop to reduce fall damage while taking that one out. I would say the flow of the drawing makes people see it 1 3 2, instead of 1 2 3, with 3 being the main focus in the middle. (or I'm wrong)
D'Artagnan Wayland
2023-04-03 21:00:31 +0000 UTCHe's clearly enjoying himself so
KingCityWitch
2023-04-03 12:34:28 +0000 UTCThe lettering covers up the bit that’s going on. Just hard to see, but I got that he is throwing the dude around.
SammyJ
2023-04-03 11:22:52 +0000 UTCI don't know what exactly is happening but i love it regardless. He do a fwoosh and a hnm and a harrumph.
Oli Platt
2023-04-03 10:04:45 +0000 UTCThe motion-blur-glowy eyes YES
Sarah
2023-04-03 06:28:04 +0000 UTCI love him so much~! 🥰
FoofyArts
2023-04-03 05:50:19 +0000 UTCI thought he was going to turn into a shark
V Kittie
2023-04-03 05:37:09 +0000 UTCSo Alexei jumped down, grabbed one by the shoulders and tore it in half while he landed? 🙃 That is what I got from it. Very colorful and his thrilled face is worth it.
Niathria
2023-04-03 05:26:52 +0000 UTCw ° ° o ° 🤸🏾✨
M
2023-04-03 05:26:15 +0000 UTC"And with the energy of a deranged husky on crack, Alexei did proceed to Fuck Shit Up."
C
2023-04-03 05:19:44 +0000 UTCHe did a fwoosh - obviously
Else
2023-04-03 05:05:37 +0000 UTCMhmm, yes. I see. Very good. *has no idea what’s happening*
Cassie
2023-04-03 05:02:04 +0000 UTCIt’s pretty though 🙃
Amanda Johnson
2023-04-03 05:01:41 +0000 UTCmakes sense
midge
2023-04-03 05:01:04 +0000 UTC
