Ultimate Fighting Girl another story novel "Hair Trigger"
Added 2017-08-01 08:11:23 +0000 UTCTheOneZeelOne wrote another story of Ultimate Fighting Girl!
Here is a comment from him.
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fUyKREpe0v4HGRA4vkTclZvkaHdG40KeaEkHrqMaAUs/edit?usp=sharing
Heya everybody, this is The One Zeel One (or just Zeel1) here, Boko was kind enough to let me attach this message. I'm sorry for the immense delay but I'm happy to announce I'm finally done with this batch of stories! I hope you'll all find it was worth the wait. You can expect translations to soon follow and then I can start work on commissions~!
This story is entitled "Hair Trigger" and you can consider it a free sample. Other, longer stories like this are available for a new reward tier! If it's not open now you can likely expect it soon. This specific story was commissioned by one Stephon Kirkpatrick and centers around the apparently quite popular blonde, Selene! (http://boko.main.jp/chara/04en.html)
This is a unique case as it's an adaption and expansion of an existing Boko video, Ultimate Fighting Girl Extra Match - Hip Attack, which you can find here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y4lSQVEgMjA
(If the video has been taken off of YouTube at the time you're reading this, you can also find it on Boko's website: http://boko.main.jp/boko.html)
Those of you partial to a shapely behind may be particularly interested in this as just like it's video predecessor, it shines the spotlight where the sun don't shine! There's also a very deep emphasis on humiliation, which of course is the norm, but in this case it's centered around a man's, er... lack of endurance, shall we say? Hopefully you can last 'til the end of it yourself~ ;)
Comments
Awesome!
Inceton games
2017-09-08 12:49:27 +0000 UTCVery nice!
Katerina
2017-08-05 11:39:32 +0000 UTCSuperb work, and it's about one of my favorite Boko vids, no less, which made it all the more fun to read. The way you depict Selene is super hot, as well as the way you describe the guy succumbing to her charms and her fighting style. Looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future!
almost929
2017-08-02 01:34:03 +0000 UTCAfter reading it, I can honestly say that I really enjoyed it! It was like, taking a step back in time when I first saw this video and was like, "Oh God... Boko is in my head! Making my fantasies come to life!" You also even added some extra content to it as well, which took me off guard lol. My only criticism is just an opinion of mine. In my opinion, I wish you would of added some more stinkfacing action to the mix, but that is all. Truly great work and I can't wait to read the rest of you stories!
Mkmd13
2017-08-02 01:32:57 +0000 UTCNice story and well written đ also helped me learn a bit about where I can improve my own writing đ
Paterbernhard
2017-08-01 22:46:11 +0000 UTCLoved the sample :)
Inceton games
2017-08-01 16:58:43 +0000 UTCAww much appreciated, hope you enjoy it~
Femdom Fanatics
2017-08-01 14:14:17 +0000 UTCYou are truly a wonderful person! Not only was your first story great, but now you wrote your next story on my biggest fetish! I seriously can't wait to read it tonight and give my feedback on it and thank you Boko877 for allowing him to do this and putting it on you Patreon page. :)
Mkmd13
2017-08-01 13:15:20 +0000 UTC
