The Rival: Part 7
Added 2025-09-14 21:35:34 +0000 UTC
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Just catching up on this... Dialogue is so good!!! (But kinda suffers from the anime trope of repeating the last word the other person just said haha - bit it's still so good). And this could have ended up so campy but you guys really sold it!!
genacctnm
2026-01-10 06:41:51 +0000 UTCI knew this would happen, after part 6. The plan worked perfectly 👌 give credit to Lucinda, she's got Dr. Collins under her control, now let's see how long she can keep Dr. Collins under her control 😉, Part 8 will most likely be Lucinda completely brainwashing/hypnotising/controlling Dr. Collins, just like she did with Clarence. And let's be honest, about time Dr. Collins met her match... Bring on part 8. Really enjoying this arc/story.
Kyle Stutcinskas
2025-09-18 23:47:44 +0000 UTCDamn, I failed to protect Dr. Collins from Lucinda... I don't know where this is going, but there's still hope. I think Professor Williams could set things back to normal.
BlueBear3221
2025-09-16 06:25:23 +0000 UTCOh how the mighty has fallen... Completely under Lucinda's and Petra's mightiest hypnotic trance! 😵💫😵💫🤤🤤🙏🙏🙌🙌
Ansel Roth
2025-09-15 16:03:37 +0000 UTCI'm curious where things go next. Would be appropriate but a little anticlamactic for Professor Williams to fall to Lucinda in her rescue attempt. I would enjoy the obedient servant Professor to rescue her mistress, though I wonder a bit if in the process Professor Williams reclaims some of her power and winds up being the one in charge at the end. Also looking forward to more of Sheila and Quinn.
Michael Schroeder
2025-09-15 14:17:47 +0000 UTCI believe in you, Dr Collins. You may have be taken down by Lucinda, but I know that somewhere deep deep inside your heart your inner strength will protect you from Lucinda's control . All we need now is for our adorkable Professor Williams to save you.
GeminiFantasy86
2025-09-15 07:31:41 +0000 UTCWhat a shocking twist! I guess the weakness of losing Clarice was the vulnerability!
K765
2025-09-15 04:02:11 +0000 UTCI know Lucinda defeated the doctor but this feels off. After professor Williams vs doctor Collin’s, it seems like the doctor isn’t fully under. I hope Dr Collins turns the tables next episode. Need Part 8 ASAP!
L
2025-09-15 03:26:15 +0000 UTCDon't worry Dr. Collins, Professor Williams and I will rescue you from Lucinda's clutches! I believe in you Dr. Collins! You will always be my master! No worries about Clarice, she is just too hot! She will wake up soon and find her way back to you! If not, I am always here for you! Doctor knows best!!! 🦸♀️🙇♀️🧎♀️🏋️♀️💪🤸♀️🥼😎
David
2025-09-15 01:17:20 +0000 UTCLucinda did it! The loss of Clarice cracked the door open, and Lucinda kicked it in. Dr. Collins lost her grasp on her trusty pocketwatch and, symbolically, realized she'd lost her grasp on Clarice—and was losing her grip on resisting Lucinda. The same pocketwatch that had lulled so many to sleep now lay strewn on the floor at the feet of a soon-to-be-sleeping Dr. Collins. Lucinda showed confidence by moving so quickly to a countdown. Like a plucky underdog in a boxing match, Lucinda’s ten-count came before the knockout instead of after. Her hand rose metaphorically over a defeated Dr. Collins slumped in her chair. So deep was Collins’s sleep that Lucinda didn’t even bother waking her and putting her back under to deepen the trance. A power move—but perhaps a tactical error. Professor Williams proved that even a sleeping Dr. Collins could be dangerous. The adorkable professor went from smiling at the slumbering doctor to out cold and smiling in her sleep in mere moments. The professor is still afoot. And Petra still pulls the strings. Sleep well, Dr. Collins. The path ahead is winding and murky indeed.
Cody
2025-09-15 01:15:46 +0000 UTC
