Rocktrolled Fungirls #10
Added 2021-06-02 19:22:56 +0000 UTCHere's a story: after working on this page for a long time and finishing in the late evening I exported it and put it in my storyboard finished as a miniature to see if it fits the other pages well. Then I realized there's a pretty big error in it.
I hope to get back to it later and fix it, but I just can't do it tonight or this weekend.
If you don't see it- the border dividing lower two frames is at such an angle, that it's lining up EXACTLY with Amanita's stomach and Aldona's ass in the first frame.
It's not a terrible mistake, but I'd rather get rid of it later by changing the angle of the border (but that requires some redrawing to do properly).
Comments
Aldona and Nissa are my two favs <3
Paqs
2021-06-03 22:24:41 +0000 UTCI like how Amanita is going with the flow. Nissa is getting some quality gropes in there
CrazyLace
2021-06-03 02:04:58 +0000 UTCObviously I don't know enough about comic layouts 'cus I don't know why that's a problem.
The14th
2021-06-02 21:57:12 +0000 UTCIs that a problem? I wouldn't have noticed it unless it was pointed out to me, and I still don't understand the significance
Daniel S
2021-06-02 21:07:37 +0000 UTCI still don't see it...
Paqs
2021-06-02 20:27:17 +0000 UTCUgh. I hate making/fixing accidental tangents/parallels like this. Not sure I would have noticed without you pointing it out, AND I don’t think it detracts in any way, but I understand you being unhappy with the composition.
Jeremy
2021-06-02 20:23:08 +0000 UTCDont stress yourself too much over little mistakes brother.
ProfessorE
2021-06-02 19:25:56 +0000 UTCHonestly, it's kind of a cool effect
Beredore2
2021-06-02 19:24:48 +0000 UTC
