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(NSFW) Carnation Comic August 2023

The most amount of characters I've had in one of these comics and I think I'm looking forward to going back to two next month. It was fun but def required a lot more brainpower than I have right now lol. 

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β€’ Oooh, given Oberon's forearm, this is set after the kingdom exile. Not that her clothes didn't already imply as much, but nice bit of continuity. β€’ I do wonder if Chiffon and Briar just have very different attitudes towards the title of "doctor," Chiffon not claiming it because working at an apothecary =/= being qualified as a physician, whereas Briar will claim it, despite him being a FORMER physician, because he still has the skills and knowledge of one, regardless of formal removal of title. β€’ I do adore Shreve's little smile in the second page's fifth panel, makes it clear this is all a very kinky roleplaying scenario for them. β€’ FAT-ON-FAT SMOOCHING. πŸ₯Ί β€’ Oberon got a lot less docile and apologetic since her first session with Shreve! GOOD FOR HER. 😌 Plus, I got to love Shreve's flustered expression, so much character. β€’ OH DAMN, THIS EATING-OUT SCENE IS REALLY HOT. 😍 Always like how you portray the eating-out sexual acts. There's always a feeling of attraction, of hungry enjoyment with them. πŸ”₯ β€’ Oh, this scissoring page is even hotter! πŸ₯΅ β€’ I wonder if Chiffon has a thing for body hair, given the amount of attention towards Briar's on page nine. β€’ Poor Shreve, she committed the strikes and now Oberon has to "punish" her. Dig how everyone else immediately registers it's going to happen. β€’ LOL, I just noticed it now, looking more carefully, but I love Briar's :3 smile the next page over. β€’ I think, for such a busy few pages of bodies, they're surprisingly easy to follow, in terms of sequential art and who's who, given the distinct/different design choices. 😁 I especially really dig Briar's rather tender expression in page fourteen. β€’ Love how, the moment the bulk of sex is done, Oberon drops the roleplaying and asks after Shreve in such a gentle manner. β€’ Awww, Oberon's such a sweetheart to her fellow partners. β€’ I do love the implication in those last two pages that Oberon stares lovingly at her partners, resting and sleeping in peace, then flushes full of love for them at the last page, with all the pink in her panel. 😊 I really did enjoy this comic, though I absolutely get where you're coming from with it requiring a lot of brainpower. This felt longer than some of your older comics, despite being shorter than some of them, and I think it had a decent amount to do with the density of bodies per page, and having to keep track of them. Hope you give yourself some more breathing room next month with two. πŸ‘ Also, are the four of them in a poly relationship at this point? I wonder who initially broach the arrangement... πŸ‘€


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