The Fall - Chapter 23
Added 2018-05-14 19:30:13 +0000 UTCHere it is. Sorry, I'm late.
I'm tired as heck. Have been pulling some major overtime at work.
This chapter is unedited but it should be at least readable.
Tomorrow I'm going to put up the poll that was scheduled for today.
I'm going to sleep now.
PS: For all those who wanted to see Saber and Rin get railed more, I'm building up to it. The real good stuff is endgame scenario so I'm preserving it for that.
See ya all soon
Comments
So when will Veronica finally set her plan into motion?
lostguy12
2018-05-18 14:56:59 +0000 UTCI hope there might be some After story stuff featuring her and Rin:)
LordMarksman
2018-05-17 04:59:25 +0000 UTCTITuria is epilogue material
IchaIchaSennin
2018-05-15 19:26:19 +0000 UTCWhile a multitude of good fan art has made me like LancerArturia more i hope we get at least one hardcore scene with regular Saber before the transition over to her older form.
jmspikey
2018-05-15 08:10:55 +0000 UTCI have a hired pregnancy AU omake lined up for the future, yes. For both Rin and Saber.
IchaIchaSennin
2018-05-15 07:48:51 +0000 UTCA weird thought. Y'know when Rin was talking about making bank and stuff...Don't the Tohsaka's have magical wombs from their mother that maximizes magical potential. Soo...magus needing excellent heirs can just hit her up with an offer? She technically doesn't even have to carry baby all the way since mages can grow them in vats half way like homunculi.
Eternity Smut
2018-05-14 20:32:19 +0000 UTCRest well! I will post questions later.
Shadowsprinkles
2018-05-14 20:09:57 +0000 UTCGood! I'm really off to bed now. Chat you later.
IchaIchaSennin
2018-05-14 19:43:40 +0000 UTCAnd suddenly my interest has doubled.
Gumban
2018-05-14 19:42:24 +0000 UTCWe are halfway there. There is still Sakura's arc. Plus all the AU omake I've got in my head
IchaIchaSennin
2018-05-14 19:40:56 +0000 UTCThat is something I've actually been wondering. Roughly how long, exactly, do you plan this story to be? I'm guessing its at least a third of the way done, if not more than half since Rin is already, for all intents and purposes, broken. Saber's getting closer and closer to that point too, so maybe even more than half way, if you have a "behind Shriou's back" arc before the endings.
Gumban
2018-05-14 19:39:40 +0000 UTC
