Gamer Night - Chapter 15
Added 2017-12-16 23:34:25 +0000 UTCWell, here we go. Later than Friday, earlier than Sunday. This chapter is the first half of the promised update batch.
I'd like to think I did a good job with it, but I just don't know. I went on heretofore uncharted territory with Taiga (to the best of my knowledge) and I'm not talking about the smut (since there isn't any in this chapter).
Anyway, let me know your opinion in the comments. Your input is appreciated and required for me to improve.
Thanks folks.
Comments
Every update is two parts, because Patrons get two chapters per month. They are still two separate chapters though.
IchaIchaSennin
2017-12-18 20:28:46 +0000 UTCThanks.
IchaIchaSennin
2017-12-18 20:27:54 +0000 UTCBravo ! What an awesome combat scene ! And is that a homage to Saber vs Berserker on Fate route ?! Excellent ! Looking forward to the next chapter ! Also cheers !
Lemegeton
2017-12-18 15:36:04 +0000 UTCSince this is two parts. Can you put them into a single chapter once the later is posted?
Eternity Smut
2017-12-18 02:23:12 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Along with the upcoming conversation with Taiga, I'd like to see his next interactions with Matsumoto and Yoruichi. I love it when characters first see how distorted he is--that he's not just a nice person, or a kind and powerful person out to help other people, but that his way of thinking is irrevocably inhuman. And even if the other two weren't there, that fight should show them something new about him. I patiently, yet eagerly, await your next chapter. ... ... ... hey, since Taiga's right there, will she see what it looks like when Gamer's Body heals him? Is he stitched together with swords, spontaneously regenerating, covered in lines glowing green code a la the Matrix...?
Jek
2017-12-17 05:58:46 +0000 UTCThe chapter was awesome, but now we have to wait for another week to read further... Plz try to update faster.
2017-12-17 03:59:35 +0000 UTCAnother perfect chapter in my opinion
ThelrishNinja
2017-12-17 02:05:22 +0000 UTC
