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[SKETCH] Mysterious Gift (4)
Added 2021-09-24 19:05:41 +0000 UTCAnd here is the final version of the fourth page of this comic! :D
With all the black and white colors, the sweet shading, the hot fire effect, and as you may noticed, the final panel was fixed again... We did a little 'zoom-out' if you know what I mean, we opened the shot a little bit in order to show all the character, because the more we get to see, the better, right? ;3
Besides, with all that extra space, we can add more dialogue and... that menacing horse spirit on the background!
Comments
Looking really nice! Looking forward to the next page! :D
Shifty Imp
2021-09-26 07:28:10 +0000 UTCLooking great, thanks for putting up with all the revisions I wanted for this page lol
Jesse Raines
2021-09-24 22:38:35 +0000 UTCLet's keep a good pace then! ;3 Thanks a lot Reeeed!
Furzota
2021-09-24 22:27:07 +0000 UTCoOOHh, thank you Sunguraaa! :D Yeah, I thought that adding the shadow of the spirit would be a nice... addittion~
Furzota
2021-09-24 22:26:29 +0000 UTCI cant wait to see more of this
RedShift
2021-09-24 19:59:40 +0000 UTCI like how the final panel looks now! With the shadow and stuff :O
Sungura
2021-09-24 19:21:56 +0000 UTC
