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Added 2021-03-09 22:26:00 +0000 UTCOh yeah, the third page of this series is coming right up! ;3
Alright, I know what you're probably thinking: "Wait, third page? What?" I mean, the last page that we saw was like... a year ago! Well, it was back in mid-November, but that silly pun was too tempting.
Actually, there is another comic in the making that has been on hold more time xd
So anyway, here is how the third page is looking so far. Right now it just have the poses of the character and that's pretty much it. In fact, there is one panel missing, a panel of the mysterious horse statue! That one will be included next time. And what is happening on this page? Simple, our girl rushes out from her house right to her backyard, falls on her knees, and a burning horse tail grows from her spine ;D
Do you need to catch up? There, have some links!
PAGE 1: https://www.patreon.com/posts/43288605
PAGE 2:https://www.patreon.com/posts/44303739
Comments
Yep! It's the strain of her tail Shifty Imp! But now that you said it, I see that it can be somehow confusing xD
Furzota
2021-03-11 17:44:07 +0000 UTCAh nice, I've been wondering last week when we'd see the next part of this series. XD And is that the sketchy start of a horsy anus under the tail there? XD EDIT: Ah no, it's not. After taking a closer look I realize it's just a strain of her tail bending down there. XD
Shifty Imp
2021-03-11 06:21:29 +0000 UTCThank you Jrain for your feedback! Yep, I was saving the pussy shot for the next page like you just said, you got me there xD Yeeeah, at first I thought that drawing the shirt tearing in panel 5 would be a nice touch, but maybe I rushed that one a bit, it is a bit too early. If anything I should start tearing appart her pants, because I drew her legs so big in the last panel xD Oh true true, the red eyes! Sorry about that! And of course Jrain this page needs still more work on the backgrounds... I mean, there is none lol (and I have to add the horse statue shot as well!)
Furzota
2021-03-10 10:17:52 +0000 UTCLooks good so far :) If you wanted to make this page a bit more NSFW, you could show a bit of her privates in the last panel. though I didn't know if you were saving the pussy shot for page 4's first panel, since she'll be looking back at the tail, which could be a good rear view lol Though I am slightly confused as to why the shirt is starting to tear in panel 5, is it supposed to be her body starting to get get bigger? Also, if you could add the red eyes to the statue in page 2, I'd appreciate it :)
Jesse Raines
2021-03-10 05:33:20 +0000 UTC
