Biology Project 7
Added 2024-04-06 20:55:11 +0000 UTCSorry for the long wait! Redoing the stomach took awhile. Hope you guys like this version better :)
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Yeah but as you said, they will resist for a while. However, when their bodies get really damaged and the resistance of their face/hair mostly dies, because of the body's condition and the gas inside the stomach, that's when the thing I said could happen. I don't think it is excessive of you to be realistic about this, nothing changes if it is vore, it still is digestion and biology. Regardless, I am so excited for the rest of the story, we will see!
Haoror
2024-04-08 10:32:00 +0000 UTCSince the story is already about "slow" digestion, I think it would be difficult to logically incorporate the fact that a quick dip would result in chemical burns due to the argument... π€ From what I understand of the story, it would be possible for the girls to stand/swim in it for a while. Because initially it would just cause itching/stinging for some time. It may be a bit excessive of me to expect excessive (sequential) logic in a story like this (Vore). It wouldn't make sense to me if suddenly one of them was digested in just a few second. ππ€ Personally, I would find it a bit difficult to come up with a story like that... π€ From what I've read/seen so far, there is only fast digestion or slow digestion (even in videos). Which, in my opinion, makes perfect sense. So I would probably leave this story to slow digestion. One possibility would be if you don't see much of digestion at first, as the (supposed resistance of both bodies) initially only allows cell damage. These would not be visible at the beginning, which is why the two initially only notice increasing physical exhaustion/weakness. Until the cell damage in their body is so great that visible damage and death quickly occur... π€ (Which would also make it impossible for both of them to escape alive, even if they made it out of Angelica's stomach. The enzymes in Angelica's intestines and the already advanced cell destruction in both of their bodies would mean their end at this point.) ππ€ In my opinion, this would be a possible solution to the fact that despite slow digestion, there is also rapid and severe damage (if that is important to you). In this way, the story could even be easily adapted for hard and soft fans at this point... Since the hard version is incorporated in such a way that there would be no story hole if fans of the softer type left it out. π Even if that means moving a little away from logic and moving closer to (science) Fiction. At least I think I saw something similar in a movie once. π I also voted for an absolute ending... But in this story I see it more as a slow ending. I see the argument between them (possible a short physical altercation) simply as a logical consequence... If I were to get into a situation like this because of a friend's idea, I would probably be pretty upset with him and react with anger. π€ But I'm just fantasizing a little about the story again... π We'll see how J3DGTS continues the story for us. β€οΈ (Google translate)
Xigbar
2024-04-07 23:17:59 +0000 UTCYeahh the argument between them, maybe them fighting and one of them pushing one and she falls down into the acid. She comes out with her hair/face half melted
Haoror
2024-04-07 16:53:35 +0000 UTCThe stomach looks great! Let's see how long they can keep their cool, though.
Dage
2024-04-07 16:43:40 +0000 UTCIt's nice that they both still have some time. π€ I also hope for a short argument between the two when they realize their hopeless situation. As I mentioned before, it felt like most of this idea came from Amber and Amy trusted her and went along with it. (Anyway, their conversation in Angelica's stomach when the problems first arose made it seem like Amber had the idea for this trip/kind of documentary) π€ I'm already looking forward to the next moments of the two in Angelica. It will certainly be exciting for us to experience the next few hours. π I have to admit that I look forward to the next page every week. I'm really looking forward to your implementation. π€π (with Google translation)
Xigbar
2024-04-07 16:11:34 +0000 UTCOooooo niceee!!
Haoror
2024-04-07 09:37:42 +0000 UTCCurrently they still think they stand a chance at surviving. Thatβs why they arenβt panicking *yet*
J3DGTS
2024-04-07 09:28:48 +0000 UTCI would prefer to see them panicking and screaming before saying they hope that they will live and accept their fate, but this is still pretty good, keep up the great work!
Haoror
2024-04-07 09:26:47 +0000 UTCNow with the new page, and the direct comparison with the previous ones... I think it really looks more realistic with the new effects (light & moisture of the walls). On page 6 it really looks a bit dry in comparison... But I still really liked it π€ I like how the drama is building for the girls now. That moment in which all of their (emergency) plans have failed and they have to realize that all they can do is wait and hope for the best. I'm curious to see how far they'll come (especially when they're fully conscious)... or how long it will take for them to become a part of Angelica. π I'm someone for whom the story is just as important as the images that go with it (especially if there's a little drama involved). Which is one reason why I find individual pictures quite nice, but prefer comics much more... I really like the development of this story. Thank you for all your work for us. π (With Google translator)
Xigbar
2024-04-07 01:32:07 +0000 UTC
