Ritual - Page 24
Added 2020-01-27 22:25:12 +0000 UTCThey held each other tightly as, one last time, the magic assaulted their forms. Little tails finished growing out, marking them forever as less than human.
Written by SnowServal1
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You're welcome hun. <3
Wuschel
2020-01-29 03:22:43 +0000 UTCOkay, I understand. Actually, it should be veins but now I know what I need to do ;) Thank you <3
MinuLia
2020-01-28 23:13:35 +0000 UTCHm, I can try. :3 https://www.dropbox.com/s/zxprvp6s00sqvf9/24.jpg?dl=0 To be fair, I like the twisted look but I think they are not very realistic. I'm not 100% sure but I guess they are the altering bones under her skin. To me they look more like very big veins instead. For example the one line starting at her shoulder-blades that is going down to almost her hips looks kinda off as there are no bones that would show off such a growth. I'm no doctor though so I might be completely wrong. D: It's just that Sophies body looks more smooth in comparison without having all the bumps on her skin. Please take this in a bad way cause the only thing for you is to give you feedback you can improve yourself with. The only thing I want is to help you getting better and better cause I love your stuff so much. <3
Wuschel
2020-01-28 23:09:22 +0000 UTCNo, I don't understand :/ Can you explain a bit more please :D
MinuLia
2020-01-28 22:48:40 +0000 UTCGreat pose here as well! I hope you don't mind a little bit of criticism. I think Elena's body looks a bit too blocky in some places like her sides and on the legs. It's not the case for Sophie in this picture though. I hope you know what I mean. :3
Wuschel
2020-01-28 22:41:14 +0000 UTC
