Rehearsal part 16
Added 2022-11-28 03:54:18 +0000 UTCAaand we're back!
I think it was a good improvement! What do you think?
BTW: The dialogue adaptation will come later! I posted to not keep you waiting any longer! This page was supposed to be finished weeks ago LOL
EDIT: Comic update!
Comments
Humm... Perhaps that could be it yeah ^^ i'm suprised her belly isn't wider on the above view there, with so much pressure it might be rounding out like that :3 tho every tum grows differently so its fully just preference ^^!
JamesTheTemmie
2022-11-28 16:58:13 +0000 UTCNot gonna complain about bigger/fuller boobs~ to me its a great upgrade >>;
JamesTheTemmie
2022-11-28 16:56:00 +0000 UTCThanks for the words buddy!
Jake Jaccobus
2022-11-28 15:44:15 +0000 UTCOkay, okay... I'm guilty LOL... I used this "little change" in the style to make some upgrades
Jake Jaccobus
2022-11-28 13:54:17 +0000 UTCOh, the size is probably the belly angle! Tight bewbs and a diagonal vision may have caused that impression!
Jake Jaccobus
2022-11-28 11:46:59 +0000 UTCthis is a nice build up can't wait to see the outcome, I hope Becca keeps most of her belly only giving some of it to Suzie to see these two beautiful girls rocking huge bellies will be a wondeful sight. can't wait until all three of your girls are all affected by this guy's power at the same time. not sure there is enough screen for that much belly but it will be a sight I'll wait eagerly for. it was sad we had to wait longer but it is something I have to deal with with other comics so you being delayed by a week or two is nothing you should feel bad about. plus the outcome is worth it and besides shit happens so be proud of what you've done so far.
UsernameRedacted
2022-11-28 06:38:49 +0000 UTCAnd since you asked what we think, i think art-wise the comic is looking really nice~ quite a few entertaining views <3 only thing i could say that feels off is like i mentiined earlier consistency, as in for example the belly size between pages, or what state its in, tho perhaps Becca was just panicking so that could be excused by that reasin all fair ^^ besides the obvious curves i love that you're drawing better and better quality each time i think the faces and face expressions you draw are also becoming prettier and better ^^ and well... Another thing i'd wish is that the comic could update a tiny bit more frequently xD; But yeh! Overall mostly satisfied ^^
JamesTheTemmie
2022-11-28 05:14:04 +0000 UTCWhew i'm suprised Becca is holding so well~ she seemed about to literaly explod in last few pages i think >>; can't say for sure but her tum also seems smaller, oh and the first frame on top left looks absolutely amazing <3
JamesTheTemmie
2022-11-28 05:05:37 +0000 UTCThis page looks great and the buildup is intense. And your killing me with Suzie's design, dude. She was just the main character's friend before, but now she's a total babe (am I crazy or did her boobs get bigger, lol).
Boojaja
2022-11-28 04:50:52 +0000 UTC
