Request 11
Added 2021-06-28 15:39:22 +0000 UTCHope this is right. Couldnt do the split hair thing as there is no way I would be done by the end of the day.
Comments
Now, the good that stands out: 1. I like a lot how you achieved with the twisting on pink's vulva! Looks great! Better than I invisioned. 2. You did great with Pink's neck and green's hair holding Pink's head! Exactly as I wanted \o/. 3. You were still able to increase Pink's torso size greatly (not too little and not too much). Thank you! 4. Green's leg squashing pink's leg ended up great. It shows it's your specialty. And I leave one question, I'm curious to know, if you are willing to answer. Given the comment you did, I can understand it was hard but... Was it fun?
brunoais
2021-06-28 20:39:21 +0000 UTCLooks very good! I'll start with the bad on this post to end on a good note on the next post. Just besides the hair thing, which I understand, 2 elements are unlike requested. 1. The Pink's left leg is not behind green and not pressuring on green's back (maybe I should have done it different in the sketch? 2. Pink's right arm is not under tension and not around green. Maybe something with how I explained? I guess as improvements for myself: 1. Try to reduce my explanations by including more references and my own crappy drawings. 2. Pay more attention to how I explain. Even if the outcome is not fully as stated, it is still a good outcome. Thank you for doing this. I'll be eagerly waiting for the sequel I have in store turning true ^^. If you have any comments on how I can improve my descriptions, please do. I'm open to criticism.
brunoais
2021-06-28 20:39:10 +0000 UTC
