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The Babysitter, Parts 1-30

Part One

Summer. Final

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Happen to be an iPhone user? If so, there is a Ctrl+F function you can use on your mobile browser. Not so familiar with Android, myself.

Lady Lucia

Not on my phone.

mighty nice

Ctrl+F for "Part Thirty" will take you right to it, so you don't have to scroll at all.

Anon

Fun twist to the story. I have to note that these big story packets are nice to have access to, but I don't like having to scroll through the whole thing to get to the new part of the story.

mighty nice

Safe from?

AndiJF

Part 30 is intriguing. I got to check the "Miley, the real 13-year-old, is more developed than Alyssa" box on my bingo card, and I look forward to seeing her future involvement in Paige's machinations.

AndiJF

Also, this didn't occur to me earlier, but who is to say that Annika is say from Miley's mischief either?

Rob

Something is not quite right with Miley. Why do I get the sense that she will betray Paige? I think that would be quite a twist, but I like the idea. Paige thinks she can control everything and everyone, and Miley simply hates being controlled, whether that's by her parents or by Paige, and she doesn't really care about going along with anyone's plans other than her own.

Rob


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