(Removed for KU) TtOW! - Chapter 150 - Designation Discussions
Added 2023-04-28 20:34:13 +0000 UTCAuthor’s Note:
The results are in! Seero is here to stay, for now! At least until 01R can find a name that can fully capture the true majesty of the Wise-Mighty-Gracious Boss-Queen! If such a thing is even possible.
Hmmm…names that fit NSLICE-00P…I wonder if there’s anything out there we could call her that would do the job…if only there were some minion that could come up with something for us…
But oh well! NSLICE-00P don’t mind so neither will we! Whether she’s called 00P, Seero, zero, or whatever, she’ll will continue to terminate either way!
…is it bad that I just realized what I’ve...err...Ateia’s done by naming the cyborg zero? What can I say, it’s been a while since I’ve played a Megaman game. Um, s-she doesn’t have a laser sword so it’s ok?
Anyways!
Will NSLICE-00P develop a laser sword? Will she ever need a new designation? Can 01R find a name that fully captures her wisdom and might and graciousness and…? Tune in next time, to find out!
Comments
So sappy 😭
luda305
2023-04-28 21:37:43 +0000 UTCWhat is a light blade spell if not a laser sword?
Kasper Lynderup Jensen
2023-04-28 21:26:14 +0000 UTCHer lasers ended up as a Mana Beam skill which she can use and combine with magic if she so chooses. It's just that between multicasting, spell fusion, and strategic magic that casting magic directly has become the more convenient and scalable option for her.
AEgamer1
2023-04-28 21:23:22 +0000 UTCWhen I read, I make all these changes in my head regardless. I figure I might as well make the suggestions as I read if I can. But Patreon isn't really supportive of that. Royal Road and Googledocs work very well in that endeavor.
Rainer
2023-04-28 21:18:42 +0000 UTCYeah, continuity errors, or blatant, "something is missing here" errors, I'll mention. But all the minor stuff, like word choice, punctuation, or spelling errors I'll ignore. I edit non-professionally for another author, and I've had my hand in a few other pies before as well. In return, I get to read their chapters before they release to the public. 😀
Rainer
2023-04-28 21:15:49 +0000 UTCLaser sounds nice. I did forget it for long: in Chapter 1 Seero fought with a laser beam against the slimes. Before she got her way with magics. Later she only used missiles and her projectile-weapons in non magic attacks. Whats up with her laser vs. light magic? Is it possible to fuse them?
Xorvivs
2023-04-28 21:13:48 +0000 UTCOops again I forgot to finish an edit lol. Or maybe...Taog won't get power creeped after all?
AEgamer1
2023-04-28 21:13:03 +0000 UTCOK, you have Toag in 2 places at once. First, you have him sitting around the fire with Ateia, second, you have him returning from a hunt with Seero.
Rainer
2023-04-28 21:09:06 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Wensber
2023-04-28 20:44:08 +0000 UTC
