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(Removed for KU) TtOW! - Interlude 133.1 - Mission Report: ???

Author’s Note:

Just in case it’s not clear, Colleöne == Personal System Manager, Shialnor == Dungeon System Manager.

What's that?

I just copied Tolkien?

You're absolutely right.

I mean, come on! I'm not going to top the Ainur and Valinor! Plus, the Eru - Ainur - Valinor setup works well for a LitRPG world in my opinion (as it should given the whole Tolkien inventing modern fantasy deals), and, you know, aren't as much of jerks as the Greco-Roman pantheon mostly is, which helps with the whole lighthearted comedy deals. As fun as 00P terminating Zeus for hitting on her and Ateia and Estrith and every female monster subordinate she has would be, even she might need to grind a bit more for that feat. I will state though that the Quenya names are just what they call themselves, they do have Latin...err 'Imperial' names among the Empire that I haven't actually decided yet.

Anyways!

What will the Aesdes decide to do regarding this situation? Will Colleöne reunite with her great great great great (...) great great granddaughter? Will Shialnor manage the work of integrating an entirely new Material Plane with NSLICE-00P's dungeon record? Can the Herald of Dawn investigate this traveler from another world? Tune in next time, to find out!

Comments

Ateia is going to need a lot of therapy if her status says Aesdes

luda305

To be fair, Tolkien copied Norse mythology and modified it a little for his whole set of books, and Eru, Ainur, and Valinor, tie back pretty heavily to the Jötnar, Vanir, and Aesir. He made a lot of stronger taxonomical distinctions than the Norse did, but it's an ancient human mythological tradition. Tolkien can't claim it, so you haven't copied him as long as you add a few twists here and there like he did. Nice work, this story has wonderful flow and pacing.

NoodleGod

Specifically, given the more metaphysical than geographic boundaries of the Source, her new material plane 'moved' away once she sectioned it off, so it's not stuck in the middle of the Realm of Eternal Night...or rather, being stuck in the middle of another Realm doesn't have much meaning in a place not defined by geographic locations in the first place. The Realm of Eternal Night lost a tiny bit of area but would have almost immediately recovered once 00P left it.

AEgamer1

Great chapter. What happened to the realm or eternal darkness? Did it shrunk? Is the new bubble eating on the rest of the realm or are de Aesdes barriers extended to this new material realm? Iam waiting for the revisit.

Xorvivs


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