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TtOW! - Feedback Wanted! New New Cover in Progress

Hi all, the feedback on the cover primarily by Voral but upvoted by a few more of you seems to indicate that while the new cover is artistically sound, it gives a significantly different vibe from the original cover that doesn't gel with how we imagine Seero. I've spoken with the author and we have some revisions proposed here:

Please vote to confirm if these changes will match Seero's personality and vibe. I plan to let the artist know if this is approved or not tomorrow, so you have until then to vote! Let's say a bit after I post the next chapter for timing?

If you do have feedback, specific proposals are appreciated!

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Tbh, I always thought that Seero had a visor that came down like a motorcycle helmet

leo zhang

To this specific eye style chance I say YES! But obviously that's not the only thing we have to alter to restore the old vibe I've talked about in my previous comment, tough it's undoubtedly a great start! Another detail that I think deserves some thought is the fact that compared to the current RR cover this one has wayyy less human body parts exposed, and while that gives more sense to the whole knight misunderstanding narrative (since she's much more packed with metal) it's also a bit strange considering that the original premise of the project NSLICE talked about a much more equivalent destribuition between Organic and Mechanic parts in order to have the best of both sides (and above all, human parts were also one of the things contributing the most to the earlier emotionally-immature-death-machine-vibe)

Voral


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