TtOW! - (Removed for KU) Chapter 55: A Bug Called the Heart
Added 2022-12-26 23:35:53 +0000 UTCComments
“He somehow seemed to know which way [she] was.” A little on the nose bro. Reminds me of eminence in shadow. Like the world distorts it’s own laws and logic because they’re the main character so it’s ok. Not mad about it, I find it amusing. Though you should be careful not to do it too much
Sloth
2024-03-26 04:05:05 +0000 UTCimagine when she just brings it up to Cyborg girl and she can just turn off the function
leo zhang
2022-12-28 08:52:29 +0000 UTCUnderstood, I shall keep all that in mind moving forward. I can confirm that I do not include the pre-chapter world-building blurbs or the author's notes as part of the target word count, they are only added after the chapter itself has been completed.
AEgamer1
2022-12-27 06:56:22 +0000 UTC@author-san, please read my comment in the most recent side story if you haven't already. Story is great, so don't be discouraged, but I felt some criticism was necessary.
Rainer
2022-12-27 06:49:56 +0000 UTCgotta love lilussees... a spider with a mission. hope she finds a way on how a cyborg can nap :p
TargetDrone
2022-12-27 01:49:51 +0000 UTCPoor lilusses
Arkeus
2022-12-26 23:51:09 +0000 UTCYay! Cyborg violence!!
Beeees!
2022-12-26 23:48:11 +0000 UTCI feel the need to create additional accounts so I can like this more than once
Eric
2022-12-26 23:43:25 +0000 UTC